Re: a comment on AIDS Bonanza! by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	SupremeDreamer 130.65.109.104	10-Feb-07/2:14 PM
PS- I felt erected when you called me chump. Toodles!
Re: a comment on AIDS Bonanza! by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	SupremeDreamer 130.65.109.104	10-Feb-07/2:13 PM
Gotcha. :)
Re: Captured by Dovina	SupremeDreamer 130.65.109.104	10-Feb-07/1:58 PM
You know, there are men who posses soft hands. And why use the finger when sex toys are readily available AND well designed for their purpose? But anyway, that aside, I like this. Well executed. Blessed with nine.
Re: a comment on Ode to a Pimple-Lyric Spawned by Phalkon's Greasy Face. by SupremeDreamer	SupremeDreamer 130.65.109.104	10-Feb-07/1:37 PM
lol.
Re: a comment on AIDS Bonanza! by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 63.212.164.89	10-Feb-07/9:50 AM
You chump. poetandknowit is quoting from Poetie. He even told everyone it was bait. I'm afraid you've been so badly beaked you've retracted into your own balls.
Re: a comment on a days journey by donmiguel1960	Ranger 81.103.124.179	10-Feb-07/3:14 AM
Gotcha.
Re: Captured by Dovina	Ranger 81.103.124.179	10-Feb-07/3:14 AM
Ace. I think you might have 'a' appearing once too many in line 2 (if not, I don't get it).
Re: Ode to a Pimple-Lyric Spawned by Phalkon's Greasy Face. by SupremeDreamer	Ranger 81.103.124.179	10-Feb-07/3:06 AM
This is pure, sheer art. The weight of heartfelt emotion is expressed beautifully through words like 'emotion' and 'blood', juxtaposing the imagery of life with that of death (as implied in phrases such as 'I now wish to be very very dead'). Moreover, the poete asks us to find a resolution to the tension between the triviality of this 'silly' life and the deeply profound seriousness of death - after all, to be 'very very' dead is serious indeed. This is followed by a passage of majestic ambiguity; the poete's 'grip on the .36 is slipping due to my tears' - is the .36 meant in a literal context, implying that he is safe, or is .36 the weighted score which his life is rated at? If it is the latter, then he truly is near the end - whenever any of a character's stats reaches zero, they are dead dead dead. In the second half of this epic poeme, we are immediately presented with 'hampering', which, by virtue of its seasonal connotations, invokes images of gifts and food in ribbons - are these delights hidden within his cranium, waiting to spill out as the leaden Muse enters? But again, there is an unresolvable conflict with his inability to shoot himself. This is, perhaps, the poete at his introspective best, exploring the reasons behind his flashes of poetic inspiration while railing at the mystic nature which keeps the words so tantalisingly out of reach. Instead, he tells us, he will wait until the blood - his heartfelt feelings - come out 'y'ears' - a subtle hint at the wisdom he will achieve through an age arrived at by not killing himself. What is more, this wisdom has a perfect 'form' - such allusions to ancient philosophy are so rare in poetry these days! - which, being timeless, results in a potential temporal complexity hinted at in the possibility of 'read (present)/read (past)'. In his "Notes on an Ode to a Pimple-Lyric Spawned by Phalkon's Greasy Face", the poete asks us to consider the possible postmodernity of his poeme; the 'neo-limerick' movement being the driving force behind his structure. But, he asks, could such an opinion be seen as 'improper'? After all, as the postmodern pimpliterature canon tells us, aren't all opinions correct?!? -10-
Re: a comment on self-suffocation by Phalkon	Ranger 81.103.124.179	10-Feb-07/2:45 AM
Hahahahahaha But seriously, do you want to know why this has been slammed?
Re: a comment on self-suffocation by Phalkon	Phalkon 70.246.86.30	9-Feb-07/8:25 PM
XD man... and to think, i haven't posted anything on here in years! i see it's still filled with the same people who think they really knoew the difference between art and trash. i'm sorry i've ever doubted any of you. i'll go crawl under my bed while you continue to blast my musings with slams you'd probably never have the balls to say to anyone in real life :)
Re: a days journey by donmiguel1960	SupremeDreamer 130.65.109.104	9-Feb-07/1:18 PM
I'm groping frantically for a solemn place to escape the foul flatulent winds howling from your asshole. It's better not to try grasping what isn't there, rather than seizing the flatulence wafting through your cranium's stale, hollow, and oxygen-deprived air.
Re: a comment on Sir Magnedrol vs. The Dragon (part 1) by Phalkon	SupremeDreamer 130.65.109.104	9-Feb-07/1:08 PM
Your efforts, sir, fall on blind eyes, deaf ears, and this young mans collapsed rectum. You had been too kind.
Re: a comment on Sir Magnedrol vs. The Dragon (part 1) by Phalkon	SupremeDreamer 130.65.109.104	9-Feb-07/1:06 PM
You know, it scares me that you chose not to attempt writing this in the throes of a wild three-some. It may have actually assisted in the creation of something better, something other than this medieval concoction spawned by the winds of your ass. And if this were supposed to be a hypothetical story pitch? I'm guessing you got a poor grade, which is less painful than, say, security giving you a violent boot out of a publisher's office.
Re: a comment on Sir Magnedrol vs. The Dragon (part 1) by Phalkon	SupremeDreamer 130.65.109.104	9-Feb-07/12:57 PM
In what language? Because it certainly is not the case with English.
Re: a comment on Sir Magnedrol vs. The Dragon (part 1) by Phalkon	SupremeDreamer 130.65.109.104	9-Feb-07/12:56 PM
I'm shocked that for a moment you even had to consider it and change your mind about Spongebob. Though, ofcourse, it would be fucking hilarious, but I am convinced at this time of Spongebobs vile conspiracy to brainwash en-mass the minds of children, everywhere.
Re: Ode to a Pimple-Lyric Spawned by Phalkon's Greasy Face. by SupremeDreamer	SupremeDreamer 130.65.109.104	9-Feb-07/12:50 PM
Er, ehem, could this be considered an improper limerick? I know it doesn't fit the particular rhyme scheme and such.. ah, fuck it, whatever.
Re: self-suffocation by Phalkon	SupremeDreamer 130.65.109.104	9-Feb-07/12:40 PM
"i tendons tear apart" Eh? What in holy fuck is with the I? Is it a disease? Did you somehow fool yourself into thinking it was necessary, like you convinced yourself that sharing this pimple-lyric to the world was a brilliant undertaking? Allow me to compact this whole thing, though I can not preserve its claim to being a lyric in the process: Silly emotions have flooded my hormone filled head so much that I now wish to be very very dead; but my grip on the .36 is slipping due to my tears, hampering my attempt to fill my cranium with lead-- so instead, I'll wail till blood comes out y'ears in the form of a bad lyric you'll wish y'never read. Not bad eh? In fact, I think I'll post this. Oh, and heres a resounding zero. Do us all a favor, smoke some weed, and find something that inspires better creativity... OK? Or slit your wrists, you know, whatever works.
Re: a comment on AIDS Bonanza! by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	SupremeDreamer 130.65.109.104	9-Feb-07/12:23 PM
Really? I think sir, that you are the one who took the bait. Because, in all honesty, the whole debacle is dependant on your volcanic outrage, which you provided wholesale, sir. Isn't it a horrid case of irony? I'd say so. Absolutely infuriating to say the least.
Re: a comment on Flowers by Dovina	Dovina 75.82.86.162	9-Feb-07/11:36 AM
Ranger, you are hopelessly infested with virtue. Stop looking for cures. S.R. has no idea how to handle that.
Re: this tuesday morning by teacup	Tman 161.184.180.205	9-Feb-07/9:19 AM
a little perdictable