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Dovina replying on Consolation by Dovina 2 Aug 2004, 12:22 PM
Thanks.
Dovina replying on Consolation by Dovina 2 Aug 2004, 12:22 PM
Yeah, Dan, do I look like the kinda person who shoots a man just because he's hopeless and helpless and unable to provide any kind of useful service to me and who's just a drag on society?
patty t on Consolation by Dovina 2 Aug 2004, 12:14 PM
is he dead, in the ground -- and she has to dig him up? a poem about euthanasia, or a failed relationship.
Dovina on A FIRST POEM FOR MY GRANDCHILd by massangel62 2 Aug 2004, 11:43 AM
A nice sentiment and appreciated I am sure by the ones it is for, but a bit too simplistic for posting here. You will probably not appreciate the response.
Dovina on two by unknown^user 2 Aug 2004, 11:38 AM
A nicely crafted picture. Line breaks at the changes of scene seem appropriate. No period after "But if he is still the man." The title is not exactly a butler inviting me into the parlor.
Dovina on Mushroom Potion #9 by <{Baba^Yaga}> 2 Aug 2004, 11:19 AM
Sounds like you believe in darn near everything. I like the cadance, except for the last verse, which I wonder why you include.
edpeterson on Mushroom Potion #9 by <{Baba^Yaga}> 2 Aug 2004, 11:10 AM
a modern skillet, dripping with fried pimples
Dan garcia-Black on two by unknown^user 2 Aug 2004, 8:11 AM
Wow. Best phrase-"propheteering ministers."
Dan garcia-Black on Mushroom Potion #9 by <{Baba^Yaga}> 2 Aug 2004, 8:08 AM
A modern kind of "I sing the Body Electric." I like it.
INTRANSIT on Mushroom Potion #9 by <{Baba^Yaga}> 2 Aug 2004, 5:58 AM
Did you want this to be just a bit pimply? Scary,fun.
<{Baba^Yaga}> replying on The Niglet (Starring Doug Soderstrom) by <{Baba^Yaga}> 2 Aug 2004, 1:49 AM
Yes, quite.
<{Baba^Yaga}> on Prophets by unknown^user 1 Aug 2004, 11:33 PM
Fuzz, so I read about those sky islands you guys have there in those mountains of Arizona, fascinating.
<{Baba^Yaga}> on two by unknown^user 1 Aug 2004, 11:23 PM
The best ever
Sasha replying on The American Soldier by x0lovelylarnx0 1 Aug 2004, 10:51 PM
Actually I'm a Russian with biracial parents, raised in a French-Russian speaking household and didn't learn english till around age 6 or 7 at which point I was living outside the US. I believe that makes me NOT A YANKEE by any stretch of the word. The fact that I have a better grasp of the English language than you do when it is my third and your first language demonstrates the extent to which your subaverage, superarrogant, and hopelessly unpoetic intellect is not worth the brain-farts it generates. Have a nice day. Yahoo! Ride 'em cowboy!
Sasha replying on The American Soldier by x0lovelylarnx0 1 Aug 2004, 10:48 PM
you mean you are way "past" not "passed" Though I'm sure in the past you have been passed by many guys who say "damn Joe, look at that disgusting marm over there"
<{Baba^Yaga}> on Consolation by Dovina 1 Aug 2004, 10:46 PM
Great
Sasha replying on The Dream by x0lovelylarnx0 1 Aug 2004, 10:42 PM
Not if they're hendecasyllabic. They're supposed to have five stressed syllables interspersed with 5 or 6 unstressed syllables. STOP COUNTING SYLLABLES Learn what iambic pentameter is before you initiate anymore verbal defication
Sasha replying on The American Soldier by x0lovelylarnx0 1 Aug 2004, 10:32 PM
Um hello? Irony alert! You've got fight/life as a rhyme, hope/boat as a rhyme, and to top it all off you've got not ONE LINE in this sonnet that is in iambic pentameter! NOT ONE! You should count syllables too hun, and you might also want to count stresses and word accents.
Dan garcia-Black on Consolation by Dovina 1 Aug 2004, 9:44 PM
Shoot 'im.
<{Baba^Yaga}> on The wispears of the night by XxRuby_KillsXx 1 Aug 2004, 8:34 PM
"wispears" highly original, totally moronic. This is the best pimple poem ever!!! But wait? What's this!!! You're serious!...? What a tit.