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Dovina on Haunted by Bachus 29 Aug 2004, 9:45 AM
"Like a book read too much" That's the way these memories are. Why can't we just let them lie?
Dovina on Mephistophelian Seductress by SupremeDreamer 29 Aug 2004, 9:39 AM
Ah, to seduce him as a female Mephistopheles devil, kind but candid, unlike the women who have nothing of value to say.
Dovina on Delicate Was by klosterfobik 29 Aug 2004, 9:08 AM
Very nice. The last line seems redundent or not needed.
Dovina on Andrew by Spindle 29 Aug 2004, 9:04 AM
Too much cliche.
Dovina replying on What Has It Gotten Us? by Dovina 29 Aug 2004, 8:59 AM
And less than I bargained for, too. Overall, women’s lib has helped women, but it has its moments.
Prince of Void on abortion by darylchew 29 Aug 2004, 6:48 AM
that's was good ..
darylchew replying on abortion by darylchew 29 Aug 2004, 6:32 AM
they wont literally come and bite us. but probably more of our conscience doing the work. guilt is a powerful tool. but if the foeti really come back it'll be really cool. ><. everytime we abort A FOETUS (take note it is not someTHING), of course we are aborting a part of ourselves. it is our own flesh and blood for god's sake. the foetus lived in OUR wombs.
INTRANSIT replying on Haunted by Bachus 29 Aug 2004, 5:34 AM
I stuck with the water theme too long on that last one, didn't i.
INTRANSIT on Haunted by Bachus 29 Aug 2004, 5:17 AM
Do you think/feel it is somehow your duty to guide those who follow your work? Picked up O.B. o A. P. Spot on, as usual.
INTRANSIT on What Has It Gotten Us? by Dovina 29 Aug 2004, 5:14 AM
look up: more than i bargained for.
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. replying on St. Patrick’s Cathedral by Dovina 29 Aug 2004, 4:46 AM
The only thing I acknowlege is my own excellence.
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. replying on abortion by darylchew 29 Aug 2004, 4:26 AM
If current trends in abortion continue, do you think there will come a day when all the aborted foeti come back to bite us? Also, do you think that every time we abort something, we are also aborting a bit of ourselves?
SupremeDreamer on Haunted by Bachus 29 Aug 2004, 4:20 AM
Always raising the bar, indeed. If you ever failed me in that, I wouldn't drive constantly onwards for the next twilight horizon-- it wouldn't be as fun or freakish otherwise. The book stanza was the best I think.. reminds me of the condition of my photo album.
SupremeDreamer replying on Mephistophelian Seductress by SupremeDreamer 29 Aug 2004, 4:13 AM
Death and rebirth, along with mental abnormality rewired for sexual geniality. It worked.. better than expected.. but still, procastination did no good luke, and the force definately wasn't working. Yet, somewhere along the road of retarded fantasy the grim cancer had had enough deranged psychological-chemo and opted for recession. [imploded nuetron star creating its own oblivion.] Yes, another yappy mood tonight... can't shut up much these days, been a good long time where I've had little to rant about or manifest some story.
Bachus on Mephistophelian Seductress by SupremeDreamer 29 Aug 2004, 2:31 AM
Sounds like a threnody.
darylchew replying on abortion by darylchew 28 Aug 2004, 10:01 PM
i will take note.
darylchew replying on abortion by darylchew 28 Aug 2004, 9:59 PM
....you actually understood what i meant. thanks. it's rather supernatural.
SupremeDreamer replying on untitled :( by XxRuby_KillsXx 28 Aug 2004, 9:26 PM
And yes, I'm bumbling round like a drunken red-faced clown.
SupremeDreamer replying on untitled :( by XxRuby_KillsXx 28 Aug 2004, 9:24 PM
Why not be straight forward and blatantly rude, I just don't care for the sarcastic but subtle taunt. I only bothered to mention her spelling and grammar to be helpful instead of saying nothing and letting her continue making those mistakes. I made no claim to having perfect grammar or spelling, and from what I've seen in the ol' historic commentaries, your not exactly the man to be avenging the downtrodden poets of poemranker. Embarrass and mock me to your hearts content though, my friend, I had genuinely missed the beatings of old.
But childishly satisfying, for me.