richa
replying on An Afternoon Walk by Dovina
12 Nov 2004, 8:44 AM
that is my first ever poemranker swear word.
As for we can both learn from him. Fuck off.
As for jroday leans toward emotion. Bow'ls. A poet does not portray emotion by the frequency of times he mentions hate in a poem.
As for how a poem can be anything but surface if it uses only logic. What are you talking about. You use logic so that your images make sense. You do not write a verse of logic and then write a verse of emotion. If you write a verse without the requisite logic you look an idiot.
Let me give you an example of incorrect logic.
P: Snow is cold
P:(the sun is a generator of all
it reflects all frequencies of light)
C: The snow makes me warm.
hey. WHen is your ban from AP up? that place is starting to scare me... DP roberson has been banned too. Bulletin threads are being censored left and right.
This poem is about Bush's Jesus not Tony Blair's or yours. Right?
I thought the last paragraph was needed, made me realise its truth and how personal it is to poetryman.
I found this poem entertaining
Considering who wrote it it's amazing
I've never ever seen such rhyming
Here's a 10 for your great poeming
The depraved rantings of a spaz.
Yes. Your a dunce.
An parp is something that starts with a vowel.
The only circumstances under which I would describe a poeme as "Reflections on/after something" are circumstances of extreme jest. Yet this is no jest. With your very soul exuding conviction, you have actually begun a poeme with the dumpling: Reflections After Reading The New Testament. I suggest you go away and reflect on what you've done.
Listen to you big time not getting it.
Then what, pray tell, is an Parp!?
There is no incorrect use of logic, for that would be illogical. And there is no incorrect use of emotion. Each stands on its premises â logic on axioms, emotion on perceptions. A poem that is beautiful and artful usually uses both and blends them in invigorating patterns. How can a poem be anything but surface if it uses only logic? It is like a scientific dissertation. To say âthe snow makes me warmâ is to apply emotion to âsnow is reflective of all frequencies of light, much as the sun is a generator of all.â Jroday is one of those poets who lean much further toward emotion than you and I do. We can learn from them.
Listen to him trump his way out of trying to trump.
Both of you shrivelled old man's sacks have misunderstood the use of the word 'trump' anyhow: 'To trump' (intransitive) is to produce a smug, trumpet-like sound from between one's buttocks.