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SupremeDreamer on Dancing in Memories: Slipping Away In The House On The Hill by Stacy Stewart 11 Dec 2004, 4:51 AM
Good concept, mostly well done-- though I think it could be shortened a bit. Blessed with eight.
SupremeDreamer on Poet, Earth mover by INTRANSIT 11 Dec 2004, 4:41 AM
Yes, I like this piece too Intransit, my ol' companion, but there is an issue which bothers me: potently... "portently" Is not a word, atleast according to my dictionary, so I believe it's "potently" that you wished to utilize in the poem. That aside, I bless thee with nine. Go In Peace Brother...
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. replying on Limbs by Dovina 11 Dec 2004, 3:59 AM
You aren't an uncouth bum, you are a Mature Poete, and hence aren't invited.
richa on Dancing in Memories: Slipping Away In The House On The Hill by Stacy Stewart 11 Dec 2004, 3:47 AM
Needs quotation marks around the first two lines or the poem looks like some misguided tense experiment.
richa replying on Dancing in Memories: Slipping Away In The House On The Hill by Stacy Stewart 11 Dec 2004, 3:46 AM
in the comment: 'By: Anne Sexton'.
richa on Limbs by Dovina 11 Dec 2004, 3:40 AM
The language acquisition device in your brain seems to have horribly dysfunctioned. These are not sentences.
Dovina replying on Dancing in Memories: Slipping Away In The House On The Hill by Stacy Stewart 10 Dec 2004, 6:37 PM
You must forgive zociac. He's lost most of his vision and 90% of his frontal lobe over there in Karak. We all try to pitch-in with the tedious chore of interpreting his comments. This time I'm afraid he's seen a host of periods and thought they were colons. How he thought they are excellently used I can't say, but, again, please forgive him. Actually all these periods are a bit like pepper sprinkled about where often a comma, or even no mark at all would suffice, don't you think. Would you like to join the Zodiac Protection Charity?
Dovina on MONSOON by rrashi 10 Dec 2004, 6:19 PM
Better than your last. I've never felt a monsoon, but almost can. Could do without "The most poignant pictures it brings," Check punctuation and grammar in the last 4 lines.
Bobjim replying on Limbs by Dovina 10 Dec 2004, 6:03 PM
id say that depends on whether you mean the poem or the comment, but id be lying. either way, the answers no.
Bobjim replying on Relativity by Bobjim 10 Dec 2004, 5:59 PM
it is. don't diss.
Dovina replying on Limbs by Dovina 10 Dec 2004, 5:38 PM
Have you read it yet?
Bobjim replying on Limbs by Dovina 10 Dec 2004, 5:35 PM
ignoring all but the last 5 words, i take that as a compliment
Dovina replying on Limbs by Dovina 10 Dec 2004, 5:32 PM
Well then, oak tree limbs do look weird sometimes. You are the weird one.
Dovina on Relativity by Bobjim 10 Dec 2004, 5:29 PM
The first six lines are good, but Einstein's Relativity is not "like" these things.
Bobjim replying on Limbs by Dovina 10 Dec 2004, 5:29 PM
of course i have. like with this poem. i've only read the first line.
Dovina replying on Limbs by Dovina 10 Dec 2004, 5:23 PM
Have you never followed the easiest path?
Dovina on Going Camping by jessicazee 10 Dec 2004, 5:21 PM
The first three verses great. And the mulberry tree lines are good - seem to complete the moth lines. But in between, well, why?
Bobjim on Limbs by Dovina 10 Dec 2004, 5:14 PM
weird
Dovina replying on Limbs by Dovina 10 Dec 2004, 4:59 PM
Thank you for the invitation of membership in The Rutherford Club. So nicely phrased. I must, however, decline due to prior commitments.
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. on Limbs by Dovina 10 Dec 2004, 4:14 PM
What a squalid and ignoble dunce cap, on a poetic career of steadily diminishing returns. -10-