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Going Camping (Free verse) by jessicazee
A quick death,
a campfired moth.
Ash so light,
wings disappear,
flying, dying
again toward the canopy.
You can only see
above your wooden flame
one half hour
of meteor shower.
A few sites down
at the outhouse
the shower drips all night,
mulberry trees
whisper, "please shake us"
"we need to let things go"
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Weighted score: 4.9525743
Overall Rank: 8870
Posted: December 8, 2004 10:58 PM PST; Last modified: December 8, 2004 10:58 PM PST
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