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Going Camping (Free verse) by jessicazee

A quick death, a campfired moth. Ash so light, wings disappear, flying, dying again toward the canopy. You can only see above your wooden flame one half hour of meteor shower. A few sites down at the outhouse the shower drips all night, mulberry trees whisper, "please shake us" "we need to let things go"

EAger to Offend 12-Dec-04/3:21 AM
This is a good sketch for the poem that evolved from it.




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