Dovina
replying on My Wife by Dovina
29 Dec 2004, 7:16 PM
Are you the real jroday, back from surgery? If so, welcome back. You once talked about a mean woman. Iâve taken the manâs side here and am pleased if it rings true to you.
thanks...
jump her men too... 10
I don't know why others voted that way... maybe they think they are so smart to realize how stupid they really are.. great one you have here.. 10...
Awesome!!!
HaHa!!! Great poem!! Very much like a breathe of fresh air on the site.
very good.. 10
Oh it just means that I am but a part of her past and may just play a minimal role or maybe nothing in her future...
I'm surprised you didn't get more comments and votes. The only detraction I see is the grave of fear in the mind. Grave implies death of fear, but the rest of the poem talks of a fight with it and then again at the end, putting it in the grave. But fear is never completely dead. A good poem overall.
My Gawd
If your referring to my last post, that is............ that you try to find my sarcasm.
Spence
Dear Blindpoetry,
I suggest , if you are referring to the activity of "whemying," that is................ that you try such a practice in private where you will be less likely to be seen by others.
Doug
Dear Zodiac:
Thanks for the kind response to my piece.
Love,
Doug
Thank you very much for the kind words.
Doug
Very nicely said, Dovina.
Your friend,
Doug
No one said literate, and this is what I'd call a shitty off the top of my head poem. Sucks but meh? Its not I love you... I hate you... I can't live without you, so why I write about how wonderful you were shite. As for whether or not I lost her, that remains to be seen.
<3 Jason
Lost her eh? Too smooth and stylish maybe. Couldn't prove it by the way you spelled smooth, what's and you're.
Yes, Verse 2 especially escapes me.
I would like to see that poem.