Re: Al-Qaida Blues by Bluemonkey	Dovina 69.175.32.185	11-Jul-05/11:47 AM
Who can say what they feel? I think this might sum it up as well as any. Might want to capitalize You.
regarding some deleted poem...	xxx 68.165.4.240	11-Jul-05/11:47 AM
pretty
regarding some deleted poem...	Bluemonkey 170.141.68.99	11-Jul-05/11:48 AM
This was kind of good whe I read it real fast.
regarding some deleted poem...	xxx 68.165.4.240	11-Jul-05/11:48 AM
not pretty bad
regarding some deleted poem...	Bluemonkey 170.141.68.99	11-Jul-05/11:49 AM
better.
regarding some deleted poem...	xxx 68.165.4.240	11-Jul-05/11:49 AM
no no no
Re: a.m. by oneglove	Bluemonkey 170.141.68.99	11-Jul-05/11:49 AM
uh, ok.
regarding some deleted poem...	xxx 68.165.4.240	11-Jul-05/11:50 AM
and no
regarding some deleted poem...	Dovina 69.175.32.185	11-Jul-05/11:55 AM
I like this too. But "even more sublime" implies that the former is also sublime.
Re: Happy Charlene by Dovina	darby pyn 207.200.116.130	11-Jul-05/3:53 PM
nice positive emotions. a good read.
Re: Happy Charlene by Dovina	edpeterson 68.79.22.44	11-Jul-05/5:52 PM
After reading the first line, I though 'ugh'. Not a good start, almost made me run. I am glad I didn't because the rest is clever and serrated. I wanna be sedated.
Re: a.m. by oneglove	edpeterson 68.79.22.44	11-Jul-05/5:55 PM
I have decided to become the anti-cockmage, and vote 10 on every single poeme on the site. But then I thought, no. I can't be arsed.
Re: Al-Qaida Blues by Bluemonkey	edpeterson 68.79.22.44	11-Jul-05/5:57 PM
I decided to become the anti-cockphage, and vote 10 on every single poeme on the site. But then I thought, no. I can't be arsed.
regarding some deleted poem...	edpeterson 68.79.22.44	11-Jul-05/6:04 PM
COCK!
regarding some deleted poem...	edpeterson 68.79.22.44	11-Jul-05/6:05 PM
really, remove the exclamation point at the end, and replace it with 'like a cock' and you got yerself a top 10 poemranker hit.
Re: a.m. by oneglove	Lenore 64.252.109.151	11-Jul-05/7:41 PM
Shades of Freddy Krueger
regarding some deleted poem...	Lenore 64.252.109.151	11-Jul-05/7:46 PM
This is crap.
Re: glimpses by nentwined	LilMsLadyPoet 64.12.116.135	11-Jul-05/9:21 PM
oh, man...sheesh...okay...yeah...got me in the gut....Very good...very good indeed. First read tonight..sheesh.
Re: where to go by AskittlesK	LilMsLadyPoet 64.12.116.135	11-Jul-05/9:25 PM
Wow, this is wild...I like the night, the dark, the moon...I like the wildness of night breezes, and shifting clouds. But I suspect you speak of another kind of darkness, here. Yes, the sun...they say it is nearly as affective as meds, for depression. I love the ending line. Abrupt. nice job.
Re: I wish I had a friend by un_oying	LilMsLadyPoet 64.12.116.135	11-Jul-05/9:29 PM
oh, dang...it was going along so well, and then the last four lines..ugh! also, >"It’s to bad I can’t think", should be TOO. I would be perfectly happy if you just dropped the last four lines...then I could give you a decent score...either that, or do something else with the ending.