| Re: greymo(u)rn by lmp |
Dovina 69.175.32.104 |
5-Jan-06/7:41 PM |
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Some nice thoughts here. It's a prose poem at best. Not free verse. As a short story it might be better.
I see no reason for not introducing a Short Story category, under 500 words.
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| Re: greymo(u)rn by lmp |
ALChemy 24.74.101.159 |
6-Jan-06/2:49 PM |
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I like how you're diversifying yourself.
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| Re: The Fragile silhouette of me by Prince of Void |
Prince of Void 81.91.128.27 |
7-Jan-06/12:43 AM |
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| Re: The Forgetting by Dovina |
Beyond_Dreams 24.196.131.115 |
7-Jan-06/4:03 AM |
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My grandmother had Alzheimer's, I wish it was as simple as you portrait it here.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
edpeterson 68.79.25.15 |
7-Jan-06/7:34 AM |
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I see you finally got the places you sought on the worst list. It seems your zero spree has paid off well, cockphage.
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| Re: The Healing Species by Dovina |
patty t 70.30.214.253 |
7-Jan-06/7:53 AM |
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
INTRANSIT 152.163.100.67 |
7-Jan-06/7:05 PM |
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Signed. Sealed. Delivered.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
PoeticXTC 205.188.116.139 |
8-Jan-06/12:03 AM |
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| Re: Dear Dad, Dear Mom, Dear Me by Miggy |
PoeticXTC 205.188.116.139 |
8-Jan-06/12:17 AM |
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| Re: Randomness by QuirkyWonder |
PoeticXTC 205.188.116.139 |
8-Jan-06/12:23 AM |
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If we all knew the answers... what would we be living for?
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| Re: history by whispern_smoke_wisp |
PoeticXTC 205.188.116.139 |
8-Jan-06/12:26 AM |
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| Re: Vietnam by the_poetess |
PoeticXTC 205.188.116.139 |
8-Jan-06/12:28 AM |
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| Re: tanka (3) by shadows |
PoeticXTC 205.188.116.69 |
8-Jan-06/2:18 AM |
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... Love is complicated. If it was easy to figure out, we'd have nothing to fight for.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
http://mulberryfairy 64.222.209.137 |
8-Jan-06/6:49 AM |
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| Re: Toasting To Our Wedding Night by Beyond_Dreams |
http://mulberryfairy 64.222.209.137 |
8-Jan-06/6:50 AM |
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I almost didn't read because of the title, but it was worth it (both your choice of title and the read).
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| Re: The Healing Species by Dovina |
http://mulberryfairy 64.222.209.137 |
8-Jan-06/6:52 AM |
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intelligent, relevant, and well written
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| Re: Birmingham gardens by INTRANSIT |
INTRANSIT 152.163.100.67 |
8-Jan-06/8:58 AM |
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The -for now- and the -meanwhile- had to go.
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| Re: Pledge by http://mulberryfairy |
INTRANSIT 152.163.100.67 |
8-Jan-06/9:03 AM |
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zodiac 66.230.117.157 |
8-Jan-06/11:47 AM |
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Good, but - "seminal"? Also, points off for using "Nowhere Man". Somebody had to work to make that up once. You're getting off easy, bogarting it.
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zodiac 66.230.117.157 |
8-Jan-06/12:11 PM |
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You shan't. If you were really macabre, you'd do it without asking my permission.
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