Dovina
on greymo(u)rn by lmp
5 Jan 2006, 7:41 PM
Some nice thoughts here. It's a prose poem at best. Not free verse. As a short story it might be better.
I see no reason for not introducing a Short Story category, under 500 words.
I see you finally got the places you sought on the worst list. It seems your zero spree has paid off well, cockphage.
love it
tight
I almost didn't read because of the title, but it was worth it (both your choice of title and the read).
intelligent, relevant, and well written
The -for now- and the -meanwhile- had to go.
I don't wanna hear it.
Good, but - "seminal"? Also, points off for using "Nowhere Man". Somebody had to work to make that up once. You're getting off easy, bogarting it.
I like how you're diversifying yourself.
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My grandmother had Alzheimer's, I wish it was as simple as you portrait it here.
Signed. Sealed. Delivered.
Beautiful Poem.
Nice!!
If we all knew the answers... what would we be living for?
lol, all of the above
idk!
You shan't. If you were really macabre, you'd do it without asking my permission.