some deleted user
on Unloyal Poon (Free Puss) by A Spanish Devil by <{Baba^Yaga}>
3 Oct 2003, 8:07 PM
Baba...?????????--> Bachus 24.126.113.154, horus8 24.126.113.154, Shardik 24.126.113.154, <{Baba^Yaga}> 24.126.113.154 Hmm...funny who those who leave nasty comments and re-write my poetry( Re: Unloyal Poon (Free Puss) by A Spanish Devil by <{Baba^Yaga}>) ALL have the same IP. Surely this person must have a life? I mean to go and re-write one of my pieces?
I'm still here. ;)Just got sick of that guy harrassing me!
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
3 Oct 2003, 8:25 PM
The difference this time, tesoro is that I am leaving your comments up no matter how many names you use. I figure everyone will bew able to see what a loser you are. Ciao and comment on. You will not get a comment in return from me.
Cutting edge.
A work of pure unmitigated genius. Poooooooooooooon!
This is my second attempt to find meaning past... here it gets a bit tricky. Small minds always exclude those who do not share thier belief.
Guess it must be an inside joke. Revenge is mostly vindictive.
some deleted user
on Unloyal Poon (Free Puss) by A Spanish Devil by <{Baba^Yaga}>
3 Oct 2003, 8:06 PM
This is plagerism and I've already sent the entire url, copied pg etc in. Get a life! Even to make a parody you need consent. How old are you? 7? And how can anyone think this is funny? You have multiple accounts and are a loser! You sit there behind a computer screen w/o a life tormenting others when in real life I'm sure you've had your share of attitude adjustments! You're probably eating a chicken leg, greasy, un showered, fat, holding your blow up doll, singing along with the Jerry Springer Show and crying to mamma on the phone about what your fat ass wants for christmas! Get a grip and try this in real life! I cannot give you an "L" for LOSER so a "0" will do!
some deleted user
on Unloyal Poon (Free Puss) by A Spanish Devil by <{Baba^Yaga}>
3 Oct 2003, 8:08 PM
Jeremi B. Handrinos 24.126.113.154 I'm adding this name to the other list! Bachus 24.126.113.154, horus8 24.126.113.154, Shardik 24.126.113.154, <{Baba^Yaga}> 24.126.113.154 Too many people...1 IP.
I see you tossed the foundational piece that my parody was built around? Have no fear I'll never get rid of mine, and we'll always have that together my love.
Yea for OUR TEAM! March March March the ides are upon us and there are graves to fill.
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
3 Oct 2003, 8:26 PM
;) exactly! You see "The Follower" needs attention and it's a shame really eh? Grazie.
Anything I could say aabout this poem would be frippery, including anything I could say.
I thought I saw and voted on this before. I thought I remembered admiring the ability to be enamored by life and living. Was I dreaming or did my computer crash? Or Both?
http://poemranker.com/poem-details.jsp?id=68364
Follow this.
Rockmage would dig this because it breaks the rules of function. A sentence ended? No period, but a capital. Numerous times. And the ellipsoidal to suggest that the thought is infinite. Genius. I want what you guys are smoking.
soft as an infantâs belly = cliche
calm as a whisper = cliche
"Survived on sequence" is a nice phrase and I like the "bellies blister" but the rest of the poem is uneven. When you keep the wording simple I think you have something, when you fall into 1) cliché and 2) using broad phrases like "lifeâs intricacy" the poem becomes hard to take in a literary sense.
Lovely. And such original thinking.
From one Italian girl to another: this really resonates with me. Some really fresh, striking language, but some of it is puzzling. Something other than eyes stitched in cotton, or am I just not getting what you mean? The last line--ill repute--kind of throws me too. Really like this, otherwise.