bunny wabbit, ltns. ace poem btw. 9.

eenteresting... very eenteresting....

Droll. Very droll. Sorry, meant drool.

The cadence to this piece bears the mark of a skilled hand - very nice. I will be extremely nitty and suggest the spelling "nihilistic" instead of what is there. Not only will you make dictionary dot com happy, but given that a web search for "nihilistic" gets you 35,006 hits versus 30 for the other; it will give less folks pause.

Unkind to whom? You or the consumed? The two lines in the middle are an interesting mechanism of transition.

my poor aching [split] brain. I keep trying to see patterns. ooo - you could d o u b l e s p a c e them too!(seriously). Maybe with chicken brule, btw.

A pleasant waking. Last line excellent pun.

Such a simple poem for such a complicated thing. I'm not sure I like that.

I may not understand this one, but it certainly does something well.

Sort of 'Why is the Sky Blue?' If you are doing this as a slam on mindless morons, it works.

I really like this. I can't why, not because I do not want to, but because I don't know.

I especially like the 3rd + 4th Stanzas. Well done.

Mourn, but we know you can't spell. Pretty good writer though.10

Boring

This is not poetry. It's only talk.

meandering. clever, but only at first.

in the last stanza change 'saw' to 'felt'. Also snowballs can only be made my people, not trees. Find some other way to say it.

pretty good, write some more 10

nice. did terrorists blow up the moon.. one day theyll do that too. 9.

you opine!- cute has it's merits