kingit
on My Time by J.B. Manning
22 Oct 2003, 7:44 PM
very good!- damn-near 10
turning blister into boil
what can I say?- some things are better left unsaid
I'm drained. Started quiet (well, a little queasy from the post prior this). Tricked into almost slumber and thaaawp!...blustering along. I like the bluster. Uplifting it was and now I am glistening over the landscape. 23.79
Really (really) dig the last two stanzas. The rest may be worth a look to really set up the kicker you've got at the end.
go getem' bigboy!
no.
no?
no.
WOW!!!!!11
MEDIOCRITY CODE
31F49081
That's why you died of skin cancer.
Don't you worry someone might read this?
Because I can.
This is good... I can't point a finger to what captivated me. Perhaps its the images so wonderfully weaved throughout this piece. It feels quietly magnificent. Thank you.
"When I blink, Iâm afraid youâll disappear from sight"
I know how this feels.
I notice your works centers around one theme. This one is not as good as your other works. 6.
Ha ha ha ha
-10-
Excellent use of letters to form words.
You forgot to turn these random words into a Poeme
TTHHIISS IISS RRUUBBIISSHH -10-
bones/hormones
break me/shake me
game/name
prawne/porn
WELL DONE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! -2-
GAY