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bitch! (Free verse) by Freethinker1602
I want to kiss him so hard it'd make his knees weak I want him to colapse beneath my passion I want to make him take everything I give him no matter how rough it is I want him begging for me to go on I want him begging for me to stop I want him to beg for more I'll give him what he begs for I want his body at my mercy I want to give him a night never to be forgotten A night where he is my bitch

Down the ladder: Jesus wept

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.75
Weighted score: 5.089402
Overall Rank: 6321
Posted: October 21, 2003 7:12 PM PDT; Last modified: October 21, 2003 7:12 PM PDT
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[n/a] poetandknowit @ 65.101.211.129 | 21-Oct-03/7:21 PM | Reply
Is this a poem or simply a collection of statements with a tag line at the end? I need to know.
[7] kingit @ 67.70.120.209 | 22-Oct-03/10:06 PM | Reply
go getem' bigboy!
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