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Warm Piss Bath (Lyric) by kingit
Breathe in all of the surroundings- exhale bad thoughts turn to cancer skin drips, fingernail decay through blackened teeth a brown tongue seems to say "more shit, they toss me for breakfast, is brainfood" & the fish's head don't fit his bowl but he's snappin' & pissed about his hairloss so the cats no longer snack on him the bites have healed, the scars are tougher than his little ears- well hidden beneath the paisley sideburns now his foaming, gaping mouth is hungrier than theirs- that all-consuming, greedy orafice a breeding ground of negativity a feeding ground of neo-divinity will suck all humanity like puss from the sore & saliva from the gullet the nose-noise yeilds to snot & barks at a clear passage allowing you to breathe in all of the surroundings now... exhale

Up the ladder: Parallel
Down the ladder: great caesar's ghost

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Arithmetic Mean: 1.5
Weighted score: 4.058705
Overall Rank: 13329
Posted: October 22, 2003 7:11 PM PDT; Last modified: October 22, 2003 7:11 PM PDT
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[2] Wobble McFly @ 195.157.153.253 | 23-Oct-03/3:20 AM | Reply
You forgot to turn these random words into a Poeme

[n/a] kingit @ 67.69.60.42 | 23-Oct-03/11:02 AM | Reply
Oh shit!
[3] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 23-Oct-03/11:18 AM | Reply
Ironically, that's what my morning shit said.
[n/a] kingit @ 67.69.60.42 | 23-Oct-03/11:23 AM | Reply
lotsa vtamin B
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