poemranker ::Warm Piss Bath by kingit

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Lyric № 71627

Warm Piss Bath

Member since 2003 · Posted 22 Oct 2003 · 4 comments

Breathe in all of the surroundings- exhale bad thoughts turn to cancer skin drips, fingernail decay through blackened teeth a brown tongue seems to say "more shit, they toss me for breakfast, is brainfood" & the fish's head don't fit his bowl but he's snappin' & pissed about his hairloss so the cats no longer snack on him the bites have healed, the scars are tougher than his little ears- well hidden beneath the paisley sideburns now his foaming, gaping mouth is hungrier than theirs- that all-consuming, greedy orafice a breeding ground of negativity a feeding ground of neo-divinity will suck all humanity like puss from the sore & saliva from the gullet the nose-noise yeilds to snot & barks at a clear passage allowing you to breathe in all of the surroundings now... exhale

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4 comments

[2] Wobble McFly 23-Oct-03/3:20 AM Reply
You forgot to turn these random words into a Poeme

[n/a] kingit 23-Oct-03/11:02 AM Reply
Oh shit!
[3] horus8 23-Oct-03/11:18 AM Reply
Ironically, that's what my morning shit said.
[n/a] kingit 23-Oct-03/11:23 AM Reply
lotsa vtamin B