God would never swear you idiot.

Very nicely done.

You must really care about this poem. I've seen it at least four times in different incarnations. This is the best edit yet, I believe. Clear and more powerful (a subtle inevitable kind of power) in the end than I remember the original to be. (But I wish people would leave old comments. I think the history of a poem is sometimes as interesting as the poem itself).

Britain is the Greece to America's Rome.

How many times are you going to re-write this poem? You don't even keep the comments (the number of comments being the true measure of an excellent poem).

Have you ever played "Monkey Island 2"? Captain Dread is the epitomy of all things Jamaican. "You can't go there, that's the forbidden dodecahedron", etc. -10-

You are my favourite slut bunny.

I don't understand this at all, so I will therefore give it a -10- in case I appear a nincompoop.

A need to repeat yourself? Is a need to beat yourself and get doggy styled.

"for goodness is often impotence masked" If this was a bumper sticker? You'd never get insured.

Thousand year chance. Under the rome heading. Try something else please. I don't agree with the repetition in this case.9

pencil (track). the harsh word stands out. find something softer. I hope you're comparing all the versions. Don't ovr work it.

Dave gave you a zero because he's mysterious! Like a woman's vagina.

You meant hells bowels.

i regrtet not commenting before 10

very good moth I praise you with a limited adition mint pat on the back. 10 patpatpat

Hmmm:? okay thats enough, it's very . . . well use your imagination. enough said cheereyo lllll. . .

lets see. i liked it. it reminds me of the poem that my nephew read out loud for the "zygote poem society" All in all it was _______. (you fill in the blank. 11511.

what a great poem was this inspired by ur ran over dog Fido . 4.ioih

oh let me guess, Inspired by the time Fifi went in the car motor for heat. 4<>gj