crwncka1
on ebb flow by crwncka1
19 Dec 2003, 5:01 AM
poetry is a creative art that can not be learned... beware
My soul is shopping.
reminds me of camping at the beach.
I miss that . 9
Here's that morning star track, by the way. Merry christmas freak and have a safe one.
i have just been educated
you didn't know this facet of his glorious existance?
LoL - it's just one glittering side of a complicated cut.
My soul is eating a corn dog and contemplating the hexlet.
There you go
I too have a callow step, extremely callow, from my sole to my groin.
Some spelling errors scattered, jerky flow- this could use some trimming and tweaked linebreaks. Other than that, not bad at all.
Blessed with eight.
This poeme has been plagiarised from http://poemranker.com/poem-details.jsp?i
Back to life back to reality...me gusto mucho..
your play with words, "i arrange my atoms"..only IF
you are a free agent.And those fng cats, arent they
just so prrrrrfucked?
He got to...And Gods mother too and Let us NOT forget the aciatic camels that Gaspar, Balthazar and Melchor rode on too. [the 3 magis names].. ahhh to be a fukeee!!! pass the frankincence MARY!
Ola bebe..more tequila down at S.beach
tu lugar o el mio? Your place again??? or mine?
The milk has been thrown out ,but the eggnog is fresh!
Your Modus operendi, thrills me to the core really.
A "mime" speaking in silence, but yet penetrating
the mind, with azure recolections of what it was,
as with a piercing of a spear.Bravo a 10+
Is this meant to be some sort of joke?
Beautiful.
Gorgeous.
However, it is a quite prosey.
Extract the phrases that most speak to you and discard the rest. -10-
"i coughed up her skin"
more lines like this. . .
-10-
delicious.
my sentiments exactly.
but it must be organic - fewer chemicals.
"why can't i?"
YES