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You tempt me to stay Walter. (Free verse) by The_Third_Isis
Mi corazon..was torn in twoo,
because of him
because of you
forget it let me reintroduce myself,ola bebe..
Hi babe " I'm Isis your X fiance and snake charmer"
Slightly amuzed after five hours,
thirty five thousand, feet up. And a small
bottle of shangheid tequila & salt.
Not so much scared
but confused
fresh painted red lips,
a little chanell..aaaahhh
there he is... hell!!!. 6"3 Miami bronzed standing
like a centurion, exhale,how could I of left HIM!!
damn him, so composed so Leo flaring he's nose.
Calmate Isis, stay calm stay cool, strike that pose.
He comes closer and
closer and I'm traped
that leo's ego will dominate me,
[panic] he..he'll embrace me?! I'm so releived,
pero silencio he isnt sayng a word as he grab's for the Loui's vitton's
those.. are not mine I quickly confess.
he grabs my one one, samsonite, and shrugs.I proudly tell
him "my pill box is empty" no wellbutrin for one month
2 weeks and 4 days,5 hours he opens up the car door
let's me in and lights up a partagas cuban rolled
he whispers [cono mujeres!]and passes me the fragrant rolled tabacco
leaves fuck these Leos...
holding my breath. No graciaz!
silence, only the song of Celia Cruz.
The same Art Deco building, and our same decor
Que bien [Just great!]Ive been blind, fallen
from grace, dancing with lucifer in front of he's face
spinning like a spider,golden baby's on her back.
crystal ball. magic bejewelled spinning
tread, till dawn. Just in time, he speaks
Keep your Pill box empty lover
with that[ killer latin accent]
Me encantas haci, you enchant me, that way..striking
a match the candle light plays on the colour of jade
in his eyes,as a tear drops into the flame.
How could of I been so human, so mother, so woman.
Love would be sexless without you.Walter tempt my soul
to confess again, what you already knew.SI! to your
handsome face,fear turns to clarity,once again.
I speak of constelations of nine moons,of neptune
mercury and how I still orbit heart and soul around
the sun.OH strike me,ADDER! do something!He kneels
beside my feet,as panic fills my head, I would rather be dead..but now
down from below, he's gaze piercing mine
as he's hand pulls back he's mane...You are mistaken
mi amor.I feel no hate, no scorn ,so you love...
the sun.I now droped to my knees by all of this,
the venus in me a tender kiss,taste the air around us
with my tounge slowly [I say perdoname ,forgive me]
on each side of he's jugular slowly I taste
the sandalwood and lemon grass of Le angel
by T. mogull and as your lips part in desire
I taste the martini with the splash of casis
this time a deeper kiss, softly you whisper in my ear
Amada mia,[my beloved] sit on "my cassiopeias chair"
and only if for tonight we'll ECLIPSE the SUN!.
He pulls me up gently by my hair, Te amo ,Te amo
Ilove you, I love you! as he unplugs the phone.
Feliz navidad, merry christmas
And to all a good night!
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Arithmetic Mean: 7.0
Weighted score: 5.537883
Overall Rank: 2584
Posted: December 19, 2003 1:42 AM PST; Last modified: December 19, 2003 1:42 AM PST
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Gorgeous.
However, it is a quite prosey.
Extract the phrases that most speak to you and discard the rest. -10-