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You tempt me to stay Walter. (Free verse) by The_Third_Isis
Mi corazon..was torn in twoo, because of him because of you forget it let me reintroduce myself,ola bebe.. Hi babe " I'm Isis your X fiance and snake charmer" Slightly amuzed after five hours, thirty five thousand, feet up. And a small bottle of shangheid tequila & salt. Not so much scared but confused fresh painted red lips, a little chanell..aaaahhh there he is... hell!!!. 6"3 Miami bronzed standing like a centurion, exhale,how could I of left HIM!! damn him, so composed so Leo flaring he's nose. Calmate Isis, stay calm stay cool, strike that pose. He comes closer and closer and I'm traped that leo's ego will dominate me, [panic] he..he'll embrace me?! I'm so releived, pero silencio he isnt sayng a word as he grab's for the Loui's vitton's those.. are not mine I quickly confess. he grabs my one one, samsonite, and shrugs.I proudly tell him "my pill box is empty" no wellbutrin for one month 2 weeks and 4 days,5 hours he opens up the car door let's me in and lights up a partagas cuban rolled he whispers [cono mujeres!]and passes me the fragrant rolled tabacco leaves fuck these Leos... holding my breath. No graciaz! silence, only the song of Celia Cruz. The same Art Deco building, and our same decor Que bien [Just great!]Ive been blind, fallen from grace, dancing with lucifer in front of he's face spinning like a spider,golden baby's on her back. crystal ball. magic bejewelled spinning tread, till dawn. Just in time, he speaks Keep your Pill box empty lover with that[ killer latin accent] Me encantas haci, you enchant me, that way..striking a match the candle light plays on the colour of jade in his eyes,as a tear drops into the flame. How could of I been so human, so mother, so woman. Love would be sexless without you.Walter tempt my soul to confess again, what you already knew.SI! to your handsome face,fear turns to clarity,once again. I speak of constelations of nine moons,of neptune mercury and how I still orbit heart and soul around the sun.OH strike me,ADDER! do something!He kneels beside my feet,as panic fills my head, I would rather be dead..but now down from below, he's gaze piercing mine as he's hand pulls back he's mane...You are mistaken mi amor.I feel no hate, no scorn ,so you love... the sun.I now droped to my knees by all of this, the venus in me a tender kiss,taste the air around us with my tounge slowly [I say perdoname ,forgive me] on each side of he's jugular slowly I taste the sandalwood and lemon grass of Le angel by T. mogull and as your lips part in desire I taste the martini with the splash of casis this time a deeper kiss, softly you whisper in my ear Amada mia,[my beloved] sit on "my cassiopeias chair" and only if for tonight we'll ECLIPSE the SUN!. He pulls me up gently by my hair, Te amo ,Te amo Ilove you, I love you! as he unplugs the phone. Feliz navidad, merry christmas And to all a good night!

Up the ladder: A Sacrifice For Freedom
Down the ladder: The cry of the Locust

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.0
Weighted score: 5.537883
Overall Rank: 2594
Posted: December 19, 2003 1:42 AM PST; Last modified: December 19, 2003 1:42 AM PST
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[10] miraclemaker @ 63.164.145.85 | 19-Dec-03/8:13 AM | Reply
Beautiful.
Gorgeous.
However, it is a quite prosey.
Extract the phrases that most speak to you and discard the rest. -10-
[10] Everyone @ 162.84.137.109 | 19-Dec-03/11:32 AM | Reply
espanol es muy bonita en los (verses) -10-
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