Eternal Wiping Great wipes have little wipes upon their stains to wipe 'em, and little wipes have smaller wipes, and so ad infinitum. -from 'A Budget of Paradoxes' by A. de Morgan, 1872

The nothing more nothing less parts are not needed I think. The reader should come to his own conclusion on the interplay between the two. Other than that, really good, certainly one of the most polished I have seen.

A poem cannot write themselves. Which is bad because you cannot write one yourselves. But why should we trouble myself? I'm sure it will resolve usselves. Goodbye, I'm going to hang yourself. It's too bad, too, because the poem's not bad (but not enough to save theirselves!) Come back when you've figured out the title and I might reconsider whoseself. Consider youselves lucky with a 5.

Shucks. there ain't no anonimity anymore. Blue is same as green. Still this bleads a little.

Yep. That is what a poet is 'supposed' to be. It is a rare dead when someone steps up to the plate.

Very nice.

Wow! So Bleak!

Nice doggy.

You need to put less crack on your eyes & more razors on your face.

During. Specifically over the poems of crystalaneswift - check out her poems if you need some filth - and Katie - she was a real little tease.

Very truthful! i like it.

You should get rid of the last line. It's utterly unnecessary.

I don't like the repetition of again. Probably just my taste, though.

Is he eating cum out of his own bum? Is that possible?

"I loved her much" a perfect opportunity to use a word I've been wanting to use all week "overmuch"

If you were to get rid of the last line the 'burn as deeply' would have to be more precise so as to indicate the fire as destructive.

Surreal nice.

is that a good or bad hmm?

Such luxury, this blatant hedonism!

L7...drugy cusion--- cousin? Very good angst on angst.