Poemranker [Poem: Broken bridge] [by That One] Thu Nov 21 19:03:07 PST 2024

Broken bridge (Free verse) by That One

Hate to be the bearer of bad news but Your well ran dry the bridge broke down and your son died. "Were the ropes on the bridge tied?" she replied.

Up the ladder: Love's Progress

Down the ladder: Boundaries

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Posted: February 8, 2004 7:57 PM PST; Last modified: February 8, 2004 7:57 PM PST
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[10] wFraser Allonby Q.C.w @ 195.157.153.253 | 9-Feb-04/6:29 AM | Reply

"Watch your mouth, you slag," I said, and caught her with a right-hook. She fell to the ground in an instant. I kicked her in the kidneys.

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[n/a] deleted user @ 24.222.81.233 | 9-Feb-04/1:13 PM | Reply

Aptly named.

[n/a] That One @ 66.119.33.135 | 9-Feb-04/7:20 PM | Reply

Thank you for your input.

[n/a] That One @ 216.148.246.134 | 10-Feb-04/5:23 PM | Reply

is that a good or bad hmm?

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