Fear of Garbage
on some deleted poem
15 Apr 2004, 10:40 AM
This is so much better than the last thing I read of yours.
I guess that was kind of a backhanded compliment.
Incredibly boring, but well written. 8
An aluminum spoon in a hurricane. 4
Confusing.
Rad.
horus8
on Dear M Foucault, or, How I knew our relationship was doomed by zodiac
15 Apr 2004, 11:41 AM
A Skilfully Skilless skillet. 10!
rife with cliche. cold as ice. forest for the trees. beg for forgiveness, pray for rain. I realize that this was probably intentional, as the whole poem is about "taking that leap" off the cliff, but still, it is hard to read so many without cringing a little. 6
I think it works well. reminds me a bit of "Growth of the Soil." Gold seed arcing against the sun. I really do not know anything about this, but I like the way you take me there. 8
HAHAHAHA. Lovely
Sorry, I just don't know this scene. No comment. No offense.
this by far is the funniest page i have read on this site....yet. priceless.
and i didnt even read the poem
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
15 Apr 2004, 1:05 PM
Hauntingly pianful. Just enough said, not too much. Otherwise it could turn into another love/pain cliche. Just right!
the structure of the physical words on the page makes this impossible to read.
Beautiful. Especially for those of us who live in TN.
I don't really get a lot of it either, but it's funny as hell.
I've collapsed a lung. Did you know that they'll refill on their own a week or so as long as you don't DIE first from fucking pneumonia.
Bachus
on The Idea of Fusion at the Beach (After Wallace Stevens) by coffeespoons
15 Apr 2004, 3:48 PM
Jesus Creased.
fuck, you need a helmet to eat yogurt.