on some deleted poem
30 Aug 2002, 7:09 PM
give an example by sighting the line and the haiku by number please so that i might evaluate your claim closer.
on some deleted poem
5 Sep 2002, 7:05 PM
you should call it -=!wow!=-. cad.M
on How? Well... by RWAndersen
14 Sep 2002, 2:03 PM
What? is this suppose to be morally appeasing to you on some enlightening level. you aren't level. get leveled, or be leveled. prepare.0 . Now the out the cat hole...pst...your structure is weak therefore you get no beak. perchance you squeek. sqwack.squack.ed.
on some deleted poem
7 Sep 2002, 9:12 PM
lol! nice poem. uric will save you! drink. bleat. 8/10!
on The Battle by Birdman42s
8 Sep 2002, 10:49 PM
neo sporin couldn't fix this with a mothers kiss and an add campaign by johnson and johnson. you fail. amputate immediately than pray that you never have yo do battle with a real writer. fraud!
on some deleted poem
8 Sep 2002, 11:27 PM
it's late..i'm tired....traumatic day at reahersal..i will leave a detailed comment tomorrow...not that you care or love me anymore...bastard...impudent SALAMANDER! why do you torture me so? our parents would have been proud. i'm proud. and nude.......goodnight....9/10!
on Don't Wanna Know by nightii
7 Sep 2002, 8:42 PM
i thought the person in the nighti was usually the one that got fucked, perchance you strap it on for extra credit? change all the "i"s to young republican headed corporations, then go fuck yourself. and your boyfriend too. boo. 7/10!
on some deleted poem
7 Sep 2002, 8:49 PM
wow! obtuse paradigm...trencherman
on some deleted poem
5 Sep 2002, 6:54 PM
it raises my evil soldier from the depths of the trouser lurch. my favorite trees are birch and ash. do you hAve my cash? the hand of your pimp is the hand of a very gay and dark shadowed buccaneer...bow!..yousellouts...bow! to the prawnes priker master! filthy crushtations...b
because you have cockitis? nay, because you have a balless sac, a phantom scrotismal pregnancy....and your writing is not...well..dare i say...worth the angel. the silence.or the corn in my shite (care for some corn?)..and all that violence...i mean! this poem is just reeking of unprotected sex and under age drinking...pre highschool machine gunning...try hell next time...they have a sense of humor down there...good luck! cheers!e
on some deleted poem
5 Sep 2002, 7:15 PM
denial: refusal to admit the truth of a statement or charge also: assertion that something alleged is false.
on Thorns by poetandknowit
4 Sep 2002, 1:03 PM
well! goddamnit! he keeps picking on me about the drugs and stuff, and well..it hurts...you know?...deep down inside of me somewhere it realy pains me...and embarasses me too...i don't want the entire world to know that i shoot smack straight into my cock and dry stroke my pets in front of my child not to mention nipple tape my girl prior to a good feces rub down...i mean realy...how wold i even begin to start allowing the therapy to work..with all of this negativity being thrown around...it's just plain uncooth and immature..and i..i..i..forgot what i was saying..what was i talking about?...oh yeah.. driving a tractor can be fun if you wear sun screen..right? exactly..
on some deleted poem
4 Sep 2002, 1:19 PM
have you ever heard of a flower called a johny-jump-up they're pretty and small, soo are you, not small though...you are huge in my huge mind, and i love ya! but i hVE TO GO REHEARSE NOW...I'LL SEE YOU GUYS LATER oops sorry about the caps, my fingers nails have gotten long in this heat...anyway..see ya tonight...wonderous writing by the way
on some deleted poem
3 Sep 2002, 3:38 PM
you are a very tricky bastard..i realy like how you get them all believing you're a serious a serious a serious...it's quite amusing, but you know i'm much to smart and good looking for that soft zestiness...you make me sick...you're probably puppeting babbit too you sick fuck..i demand a duel (in latin) shadow master..your friend the siberian cannibal.a
on some deleted poem
3 Sep 2002, 3:48 PM
you are a very disturbed young man! 10.i knew i wrote my short story st. leone of st.germaine about a real legend, i just didn't know it was you.
on St. Germain & The Charismatically Uncomitted by <{Baba^Yaga}>
3 Sep 2002, 4:08 PM
it's time to unleash part two of the series..stand fast..or fast rather...repent! here cometh Saint Leone & his chinable sloth...stay tuned on channel llpz.t
on some deleted poem
3 Sep 2002, 7:12 PM
you are a riot. da. we should seriously consider asking nentwined if he would create a internet live computer camera tv show around poemranker.com and some of it's more entertaining rankers......we could get rich and then p[lay foozball for the rest our mentally demanding existence...a monumentum aere perennius (omerta) x
on some deleted poem
1 Sep 2002, 7:43 PM
do me favor, change the end around a bit maybe, the king solomon stuffs gotta go maybe.....and then add another sentence ater i dreamt....like could tell the difference between revenge and growth or say blah..blah...i dont know something to that extent
on some deleted poem
30 Aug 2002, 7:19 PM
abed and unum, excellent you win! what? who cares...you took the time. you must atleast give the title credit for being honest or not....care to dance? i have sherry!
on Intense Irrational Realities by Venus
30 Aug 2002, 5:26 PM
Bachus said thank you darling for the time in playnig with the boy who shot birds. your hair looks great today by the way.