Angel

by nightii

Member since 2002 · Posted 5 Sep 2002 · 3 comments

I stumbled on my way to Heaven, and the Angel I meant to embrace turned away in silence.

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[n/a] vulcan 5-Sep-02/9:49 AM Reply

nice!simple and to the point!(Did you have any intention in your line's division?I like to know)7

[n/a] nightii 5-Sep-02/6:51 PM Reply

no, no hidden intentions with the layout. It just seemed to feel best that way.

[2] <{Baba^Yaga}> 5-Sep-02/7:01 PM Reply

because you have cockitis? nay, because you have a balless sac, a phantom scrotismal pregnancy....and your writing is not...well..dare i say...worth the angel. the silence.or the corn in my shite (care for some corn?)..and all that violence...i mean! this poem is just reeking of unprotected sex and under age drinking...pre highschool machine gunning...try hell next time...they have a sense of humor down there...good luck! cheers!e