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Angel (Free verse) by nightii I stumbled
on my way to
Heaven,
and the Angel
I meant to
embrace
turned
away
in silence.
Up the ladder:
life
Down the ladder:
yet to be determined
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 3.5
Posted: September 5, 2002 7:33 AM PDT; Last modified: September 5, 2002 7:33 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.8211956 Overall Rank: 10836 Comments:
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vulcan @ 80.242.3.202
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5-Sep-02/9:49 AM
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nice!simple and to the point!(Did you have any intention in your line's division?I like to know)7
because you have cockitis? nay, because you have a balless sac, a phantom scrotismal pregnancy....and your writing is not...well..dare i say...worth the angel. the silence.or the corn in my shite (care for some corn?)..and all that violence...i mean! this poem is just reeking of unprotected sex and under age drinking...pre highschool machine gunning...try hell next time...they have a sense of humor down there...good luck! cheers!e
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