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Angel (Free verse) by nightii

I stumbled on my way to Heaven, and the Angel I meant to embrace turned away in silence.

<{Baba^Yaga}> 5-Sep-02/7:01 PM
because you have cockitis? nay, because you have a balless sac, a phantom scrotismal pregnancy....and your writing is not...well..dare i say...worth the angel. the silence.or the corn in my shite (care for some corn?)..and all that violence...i mean! this poem is just reeking of unprotected sex and under age drinking...pre highschool machine gunning...try hell next time...they have a sense of humor down there...good luck! cheers!e




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