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yet to be determined (Free verse) by xanthippe
into deathly dark forests alive guided by the light in his eyes I come upon a forked road assaulting love. brushing back hair from heavenly face his lips stand together with perfect embrace light concentrates, catapulting us beyond time. spinning breath, moment's merging our feet meet miles above earth together start melting surging purpose supernovas of our birth.

Up the ladder: Angel
Down the ladder: Anchored pockets

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.5
Weighted score: 4.8211956
Overall Rank: 10843
Posted: October 29, 2002 12:15 AM PST; Last modified: October 29, 2002 12:15 AM PST
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