on some deleted poem
13 Dec 2002, 7:09 PM
pupas that wear masks..are..um...cool.
on some deleted poem
16 Dec 2002, 2:33 PM
policia! Brew-ha-dia! figured.
on You wouldn't Accept by GTK
12 Dec 2002, 2:15 PM
a witches wart shant ne'er thwart..n
on Forbidden fruit by GTK
12 Dec 2002, 2:26 PM
smegma..great title..ewer..filter.lugnut.crook.booger.
on some deleted poem
16 Dec 2002, 2:31 PM
do you think that by mentioning famous painters inbetween odd daily functions and mixing that with different rooms in a house you come across as being well traveled and knowing? you are painfully wrong.
on Music That Cannot Exist by Fetylum
16 Dec 2002, 2:39 PM
"to music that cannot exist" is the only worth while quote in i would suggest making
"Our four sets of bodies dancing about, hands tapping on the steering
wheel and seats. Bobbing our heads, to music that cannot exist." the whole poem, but that's impossible isn't it cuz that would just ruin your point now wouldn't it. "press alt 4" what the fuck does that mean? oh wait...wait...i..almost..oh ha1ha!ha! NO.
"Our four sets of bodies dancing about, hands tapping on the steering
wheel and seats. Bobbing our heads, to music that cannot exist." the whole poem, but that's impossible isn't it cuz that would just ruin your point now wouldn't it. "press alt 4" what the fuck does that mean? oh wait...wait...i..almost..oh ha1ha!ha! NO.
on some deleted poem
16 Dec 2002, 2:28 PM
ha ha ha that was amazing..i give this fucking train wreck a five and it's #1 now. only in america..ha! ha! WWWWWWOOOOAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!
on some deleted poem
16 Dec 2002, 1:59 PM
jesus christ.change sodomizer? to sodomite..and hollywood to Bethlehem, because well Bethlehem is..still, just Bethlehem except when the sumarians were there than it was cthulehem. also,
"In my subconscious of blasphemy," are you stoned?
"The Dove attacked me in a dream,".
ha ha ha....priceless. ha ha ha.
And Bethlehem is Hollywood,
with a protestant cross on it. see the problem with this is it's false.it's 40% scientologist 59% jew, 1% THE FUTURE! kill vin deisal! kill vin diesel! kill dean anderson. lol!
"In my subconscious of blasphemy," are you stoned?
"The Dove attacked me in a dream,".
ha ha ha....priceless. ha ha ha.
And Bethlehem is Hollywood,
with a protestant cross on it. see the problem with this is it's false.it's 40% scientologist 59% jew, 1% THE FUTURE! kill vin deisal! kill vin diesel! kill dean anderson. lol!
on A holiday warning by INTRANSIT
15 Dec 2002, 6:47 PM
bad christmas sweaters and socks? i think he meant bad colored clothing left on racks put into presents...forget it.
on some deleted poem
15 Dec 2002, 6:19 PM
YES! YES! KEEP giving it tens you fucking sellouts..this poem is this biggest crock of shit yet..ask yourself where does it leave you at the end? with hope..too dream? a better grasp on the magic of life? my birthright? Growing larger now i feel?! lol. i see images that are surreal? so do i, but no where in this poem..you describe absolutely nothing, you take the reader actively..no where..oh by the way my favorite is flying on a flight of clouds, which let's face it..beats united and peanut bags anyday...both of you should be ashamed of yourselves..lose the first line, blundering geniuses is a bad set up too boot..now excuse me while i go try to rediscover once again where american poetry went so horribly fucking wrong. no thanks to you two..FUCK!
on some deleted poem
15 Dec 2002, 6:24 PM
the title should be warning enough to all..wow! look at me! i'm in a relinquished reality right inbetween puberty and the peace corps somewhere in Honduras fighting poverty and those who can't 'understand' their dreams like me..look at me i'm fucking relinquishing reality..holy toledo..<here's a quicker cheaper way. huff gas.>
on Like Heraldo's Vault? by pessa
14 Dec 2002, 12:53 PM
is it scalpel?
on Marching Orders by blackball
14 Dec 2002, 1:01 PM
weird..like a harlem globe trotter space oddity.
on A hard life by INTRANSIT
13 Dec 2002, 7:07 PM
http://www.gangbox.com/mp3/thorn%20apple%20the%20baby%20fat.mp3
nice retouches here's a x-mas present. enjoy.
nice retouches here's a x-mas present. enjoy.
on Recent History by Nicholas Jones
12 Dec 2002, 2:43 PM
1 out of 3 americas still think that the earth was created 10,000 years ago, and we all descended from adam and eve..they can't conceive radiation dating, darwin, and or biological evolution sped up or tweaked by environmental pressures..
in the whitehouse it turns to 2 out of three...nothing will change until a dirty bomb is placed in the whitehouse laundry chute, with a nice blimp released mid west small pox epidemic....accompanied by an asteroid the size of rhodeisland hitting the pacific..than it's safe to say things will get better again..except ewer for spanish marine live.. that could take another hundred years.
in the whitehouse it turns to 2 out of three...nothing will change until a dirty bomb is placed in the whitehouse laundry chute, with a nice blimp released mid west small pox epidemic....accompanied by an asteroid the size of rhodeisland hitting the pacific..than it's safe to say things will get better again..except ewer for spanish marine live.. that could take another hundred years.
on la petite mort by poetekzen
16 Dec 2002, 2:24 PM
But can you staple and stamp with your arms in a pole soaked in semen with your chin. how many words a minute? next.
on How Could You Leave by GTK
12 Dec 2002, 2:12 PM
ha! ha! what a ringer...s
on Music That Cannot Exist by Fetylum
16 Dec 2002, 2:45 PM
my homey? cliffside i'm guessing your either english young and searching for an identity, or american and a savant, autistic..a bit sharp and dull..the appropriate term is me homie, spleefton.
on some deleted poem
16 Dec 2002, 2:26 PM
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