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Like Heraldo's Vault? (Free verse) by pessa sometimes it's good
to test oneself,
undress oneself
from the run of routine trappings.
you've been the surgeon
scapel in hand,
removing the strands
of my societal placed, plasticized wrappings.
I stand somewhat still
with some unease,
and sensitivity pleas
as you dissect each layer with care.
in your humanistic search
locating the core
delving for more
I hopefully wondered, is anything there?
Up the ladder:
Panning for gold
Down the ladder:
That feeling
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Posted: December 13, 2002 2:21 PM PST; Last modified: December 13, 2002 2:21 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.0476813 Overall Rank: 6841 Comments:
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<{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.113.154
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14-Dec-02/12:53 PM
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is it scalpel?
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