Re: The Tuesday Dogs by Caducus	4-May-04/11:49 AM
awww, very sad.
Re: a comment on Black Belt by etherealmaiden	3-May-04/5:13 PM
WOW... that whole thing took place while i was away. Thanks for all the info and i'll look out for all of it in the future. ;)
Re: a comment on Black Belt by etherealmaiden	3-May-04/5:13 PM
i'm not much for concrete poetry, but i'll look into it, thanks! how do you suggest doing it since all the lines are the same length... just push them altogether until i get the right shape?
Re: a comment on Black Belt by etherealmaiden	3-May-04/9:37 AM
can i get an explanation of why you think it doesn't work? Isn't this supposed to be a constructive process?
Re: a comment on Black Belt by etherealmaiden	3-May-04/8:46 AM
not exactly for me, but it's whatever you make of it... so sure. For me it is about strangulation and pulling tighter as you think about all of the things that you can't do right and all the pressure. They are both forms of self-mutualtion and it works for both. *shrugs* it's up for interpretation
Re: Falling by QuirkyWonder	2-May-04/12:31 PM
very cute. I like the thought of both falling in love at the same time. :)
Re: a comment on Fly by etherealmaiden	18-Mar-04/2:50 PM
do i get a reason or are you just going to be rude?
Re: a comment on Pop the Pill by etherealmaiden	3-Mar-04/10:11 AM
By write it for myself i mean to get it out of my system not to keep it locker away although that's what i did with most of it until a few years ago. oh well...thanks for the compliment hidden in there though... i'll try not to bludgeon you too much more.
Re: a comment on Pop the Pill by etherealmaiden	3-Mar-04/10:10 AM
thank you... you get it.
Re: a comment on Pop the Pill by etherealmaiden	2-Mar-04/7:06 PM
I didn't write this poem for others... it was just a way to release the guilt that was scrammbling in my head about something that i did to myself although it didn't reach this extreme. Sorry but your comment just made me mad because you don't know what my life is really like, but i'll accept that criticism. thanks for the input.
Re: paint me a poem (try 2) by nentwined	2-Mar-04/12:06 PM
coolies.
Re: Blonded by the Light by w~* ATHENA *~w	2-Mar-04/11:59 AM
interesting... in a good kinda odd way
Re: Ex In Bonds by OneFingerAnswer	1-Mar-04/10:59 AM
I really like this poem but that line "i can't do what i know it is that i have to do" is kinda confusing...I'd just take out "it is that", but the rest of it is great. I really like the imagery and all that.