| Poem: Submit | Random | Best | Worst | Recent | Comments |
|
Ex In Bonds (Other) by OneFingerAnswer I got you hooked and threw you back
And you got tangled in the slack
I feel guilty for setting the snare
And yet I still leave you there
I just want to cut you loose
But I let you play in your noose
You can`t let go of the one who can`t face you
I can't do what I know it is that I have to do
You're cuffed heart to heart with me
But I can`t look long enough to turn the key
Up the ladder:
For James Thomson(1834-1882):an Epitaph
Down the ladder:
The Yule tide log
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 5.2
Posted: September 22, 2002 1:59 PM PDT; Last modified: September 22, 2002 1:59 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.1 Overall Rank: 6062 Comments:
[8]
INTRANSIT @ 205.188.209.107
|
22-Sep-02/7:04 PM
|
Reply
Nice rhyme! Almost fooled me with the title, or did you? Next time, turn it up!
Let the poor bastard go! I know how it feels. Horrible! Effective poem though.
that's the problem with chick see.. that's why i like the chickity chickity chaw of my turn tables and the flash of the disco ball, and cocaine and tube tops more now..me and beck are midnite vultures.
I really like this poem but that line "i can't do what i know it is that i have to do" is kinda confusing...I'd just take out "it is that", but the rest of it is great. I really like the imagery and all that.
212 view(s)
|
||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
