Ex In Bonds

Member since 2002 · Posted 22 Sep 2002 · 4 comments

I got you hooked and threw you back And you got tangled in the slack I feel guilty for setting the snare And yet I still leave you there I just want to cut you loose But I let you play in your noose You can`t let go of the one who can`t face you I can't do what I know it is that I have to do You're cuffed heart to heart with me But I can`t look long enough to turn the key

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[8] INTRANSIT 22-Sep-02/7:04 PM Reply

Nice rhyme! Almost fooled me with the title, or did you? Next time, turn it up!

[7] Christof 23-Sep-02/3:56 AM Reply

Let the poor bastard go! I know how it feels. Horrible! Effective poem though.

[8] Bachus 7-Dec-02/5:43 PM Reply

that's the problem with chick see.. that's why i like the chickity chickity chaw of my turn tables and the flash of the disco ball, and cocaine and tube tops more now..me and beck are midnite vultures.

[6] etherealmaiden 1-Mar-04/10:59 AM Reply

I really like this poem but that line "i can't do what i know it is that i have to do" is kinda confusing...I'd just take out "it is that", but the rest of it is great. I really like the imagery and all that.