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Ex In Bonds (Other) by OneFingerAnswer

I got you hooked and threw you back And you got tangled in the slack I feel guilty for setting the snare And yet I still leave you there I just want to cut you loose But I let you play in your noose You can`t let go of the one who can`t face you I can't do what I know it is that I have to do You're cuffed heart to heart with me But I can`t look long enough to turn the key

etherealmaiden 1-Mar-04/10:59 AM
I really like this poem but that line "i can't do what i know it is that i have to do" is kinda confusing...I'd just take out "it is that", but the rest of it is great. I really like the imagery and all that.




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