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Falling (Free verse) by QuirkyWonder The touch of your lips
The warmth of your embrace
I could never tell you
All the things I think
My mind is overflowing
With the beauty you behold
Everywhere I look
I seem to see your face
Everytime I breathe
I can only smell you
I'm not quite falling
But when I do
I don't want you there to catch me
I want you to be falling too
Up the ladder:
On The Inside
Down the ladder:
Blind
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Posted: May 1, 2004 9:02 PM PDT; Last modified: May 1, 2004 9:02 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.0 Overall Rank: 7841 Comments:
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etherealmaiden @ 66.71.73.78
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2-May-04/12:31 PM
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very cute. I like the thought of both falling in love at the same time. :)
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