| Re: Fleas by bigbigdog |
19-Sep-02/10:56 AM |
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Okay, fuck face it is one thing to be an idiot and have no one know you are, but when you display what a fuck you are to the world, well that is another story. You hack, you fucking rip off aritist, you fucking thief, you fucking plagiarist. DO NOT STEAL WORK FROM POETS, especially OGDEN NASH and claim it as your own. This is RUDE and FUCKING WRONG. This poem, one of the shortest ever written, has more profundities in it than you could ever think up in a lifetime. You are an insult, a worthless fucking trite of a human being. And if you do not die soon for this action, I hope your life is miserable just the same. Nentwind, we have to get control of this shit. Delete this poem.
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| Re: Winter by morffrom |
19-Sep-02/8:59 AM |
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Why heaven? That kind of blows the image for me of an otherwise welcome attempt at haiku.
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| Re: In the Light by nocturnalism |
19-Sep-02/8:55 AM |
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Besides being awful, I think you have a terrible misunderstanding of neurosis and that adds to the banality twofold.
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| Re: a comment on Tugboats by poetandknowit |
19-Sep-02/8:51 AM |
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outline is complete, first stanza finished. no word from frass. but, my aim is true.
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| Re: a comment on Circle by Christof |
19-Sep-02/8:50 AM |
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Yes, and all like clockwork. I was lost over the weekend when you did not post anything. Nentwhistle should make an exception for you and let you post as much as you want. Just so you know, in my new poem I was so inspired by your work that I too used birdies.
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| Re: a comment on Tugboats by poetandknowit |
19-Sep-02/8:43 AM |
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Did you see my challenge to Frass? I thought it very chivalrous.
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| Re: Circle by Christof |
19-Sep-02/8:41 AM |
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Ah yes, the Times, coffee, a tug and poo and a poem from Chistof to start my day. The circle motif is a bit overused, but always sweet when chaps don't throw the cynicism behind it. I would do that, but you my friend, are to damn sweet.
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| Re: a comment on Tugboats by poetandknowit |
19-Sep-02/8:35 AM |
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This is almost a half unveiled compliment from you. But you are right. Two months ago, it was Tolstoy (or Horus8 Inc in our little world) now it is down to this. Still snipping.
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| Re: a comment on Why... by livingcanvas |
18-Sep-02/11:00 PM |
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Well there is a clever response: I meant to do that. I did. I did. I like to write crap that is just crap and not crap that is crap but actually makes fun of other crap that is 100 percent crap. Pat on the shoulder for you my boy. And if the poetry is good on this site it gets good ratings and comments; if it is bad, well, same thing in many cases, but in others, it gets what it deserves.
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| Re: Why Is It When I...? by liljsmith87 |
18-Sep-02/10:50 PM |
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Please stop writing. Please. Pretty please. Pretty please with sugar on top. Is anyone here a HS creative writing teacher? Please, if so, tell me how do you stand going to your job every day?
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| Re: Why... by livingcanvas |
18-Sep-02/10:39 PM |
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This has to be the dumbest poem ever written or even thought of in the history of bad poem writing. This is ten times worse than a flaming pustule of a pimple poem. This is 10 times as bad as anything I have ever read in my thirty three paltry years. The horror of having to read something so unworthy has made me... ... ... run to the restroom ... ... ... why ... ... why ... ... why ... ... Did yu show this to your mother, teacher, puppy. did you get a gold star? Yes, delete, delete, del....
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| Re: a comment on Grandma by waltfreakinwhitman |
17-Sep-02/12:22 PM |
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Nothing. I spent the night there once. It is one of the poorest cites in the US, which is funny since it is in the wealthiest state. Springfield, MA. Now that has to be the most boring city in NE. I won't take you there at least not in my poem.
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| Re: a comment on Grandma by waltfreakinwhitman |
17-Sep-02/12:07 PM |
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not me, with me..........but not in Hartford.
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| Re: a comment on Grandma by waltfreakinwhitman |
17-Sep-02/12:05 PM |
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| Re: a comment on Grandma by waltfreakinwhitman |
17-Sep-02/12:02 PM |
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This is not chitchat. This is a serious discussion regarding a serious poem.
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| Re: a comment on Grandma by waltfreakinwhitman |
17-Sep-02/12:01 PM |
not you, with you....
Ha! working on my love poem.
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| Re: a comment on Grandma by waltfreakinwhitman |
17-Sep-02/11:59 AM |
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| Re: a comment on Grandma by waltfreakinwhitman |
17-Sep-02/11:59 AM |
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| Re: a comment on Grandma by waltfreakinwhitman |
17-Sep-02/11:53 AM |
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| Re: a comment on Grandma by waltfreakinwhitman |
17-Sep-02/11:53 AM |
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do I act like I have an alter ego?
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