Re: a comment on Xmas gifts list by lunar	19-Dec-02/1:31 PM
My poems are quite fine. You could learn something from reading them. Get a clue. People do not like me because they cannot accept criticism whether valid or simply verbally harsh (usually given when the attempted poem bears absolutely no merit, like yours). Sorry.
Re: a comment on Xmas gifts list by lunar	19-Dec-02/1:26 PM
Have you ever been to Death Valley? It is far from empty. It is quite a lovely place. The shear vastness of it. Do not use western America in your putrid examples. It is as beautiful place as there is, desert or no desert.
Re: a comment on Xmas gifts list by lunar	19-Dec-02/1:19 PM
Will you please use the English language correctly? I do not have 10s because people do not like me. So they give me zeros. It is all they have in the virtual sense to retaliate.
Re: a comment on UltraSound by UnityMitford	19-Dec-02/1:17 PM
I do not have a screen play.
Re: a comment on UltraSound by UnityMitford	19-Dec-02/12:12 PM
Hey, Unity can I read your screenplay?
Re: a comment on UltraSound by UnityMitford	19-Dec-02/11:54 AM
I was in LA yesterday. At the Stillwell. Meetings and money begging.
Re: a comment on UltraSound by UnityMitford	19-Dec-02/11:21 AM
No fuck you, pretty boy. If you bothered to make some sense this would never happen. I am just trying to keep the karma balance. And where were you yesterday. I stopped by the address you gave me and no one was home. You pay four car payments to live there, wow. Where was the pool? I told Romer to keep an eye out for you and the boy. You know "No Child Left Behind."
Re: March by <~>	19-Dec-02/10:55 AM
March is Colorado's snowiest month. So it is good you took this to CT and made it your own rather than leave it out here in the BenRice haiku. It is a desert out here. We need more vocabulary for the many shades of brown. If it were not for the immense blue sky, white-capped mountains and non-native evergreen we would all perish and be blinded to whiteness out here. Very nice in your country.
Re: a comment on UltraSound by UnityMitford	19-Dec-02/10:18 AM
Please, do us all a favor and shut up.
Re: a comment on Mind of War by t_t_redhot	17-Dec-02/8:33 PM
Your welcome. The Rice thing was a cast, and see, it worked.. As for the poem, I do think your intentions are sincere but maybe the language is a bit over dramatic.
Re: a comment on Mind of War by t_t_redhot	17-Dec-02/8:31 PM
It is not jazz. Croon should give that away. In addition, it is "write." Try the exercise sometime. It might help the mental constipation of talking in circles and making even less sense. Paranoia may destroy ya. See you soon. With love, PAKI.
Re: a comment on Mind of War by t_t_redhot	17-Dec-02/8:29 PM
Here you go. Knock yourself out. http://www.stanrice.com/poetry/fearitself.htm
Re: fire by bxjay170	17-Dec-02/7:58 PM
Why all the /////s and @s?
Re: Mind of War by t_t_redhot	17-Dec-02/7:47 PM
I think you are trying to be deep here for your own good. This sounds like a good Stan Rice poem. But that just will not do. Maybe try to calm the images a bit.
Re: Is It Love by angel_uy	17-Dec-02/7:44 PM
I just read this, but it was called "Trust."
Re: flying home by daniella	17-Dec-02/7:43 PM
Some nice lines.
Re: a comment on of people and places (final cut)I by INTRANSIT	17-Dec-02/7:05 PM
I am just talking within the metaphor you are using. It is of a game, although a most difficult one. That angle can work there. But the way it is being approached is running away from the integrated but separate issue, which is a hefty subject and noble to tackle. The hexarchy issue is simply the pieces that go on that board. Pawn. Knight. King. You get the picture. It invokes class in a modern sense and I have seen it done with some skill by a fantastic poet by the name of (no, not Stan Rice) Thomas Lux. Trent Lott is in every magazine and newspaper in America right now: finally the closet racist and notorious proponent of bad hair has opened his mouth about race again. As I said, think this through. Make sure the images are saying what you want. It is tricky when dealing with the game board.
Re: a comment on of people and places (final cut)I by INTRANSIT	17-Dec-02/6:24 PM
Hmmm. I am not sure that it is coming across completely. The integration of a chessboard conjures competition of the game, plus the way you speak of it sounds more like segregation. Are you pro-Lott? Plus, it also establishes a hierarchy. I think you might benefit from thinking it through a bit more. Cheers.
Re: a comment on I Can Write A Wrong, But I Can't Right A Poem by horus8	17-Dec-02/6:19 PM
Speaking of talking in circles.
Re: a comment on I Can Write A Wrong, But I Can't Right A Poem by horus8	17-Dec-02/5:43 PM
I have no idea what you are talking about because I have no idea who you are. One minute you say everything I know up until this pint is a fiction and then you say I shit all over friends and family as a propaganda campaign against your poetry. Huh? Which is it? Are you straight up or straight down? When Z told me you were really in the Brig I apologized, but see, then you come back and say something different. I do not create personas. I am just myself. As far as the poems, well I believe I have said both positive and negative things about your work. Minus, of course, the works under Bacchus. You have been paranoid in the past over this issue. I did not get it then and I do not get it now. Now, last night I said things about your work, but you were threatening me with bravado so I was trying to keep poetry in the conversation. Up until that point if you go back and look at comments relating to your work I have tried to be constructive there. The fact that I even pay attention to you was a sign of respect and you should have known this. I can posture with the best of them because it is all a game to me. If you say stop I will stop, if not, I tend to go to the mattresses. God may just grant that wish, you never know.