on Blinking by zodiac
14 Mar 2004, 8:00 PM
You could surprise me and you did.
replying on To Avalon by annabellee
30 Jan 2004, 9:32 PM
Thanks. If you can come up with something stronger, I'm listening. Writing in his style can be torturous.
I think I'll let the swelling go down before giving it another go.
I think I'll let the swelling go down before giving it another go.
on How to sleep sitting up by Bachus
30 Jan 2004, 8:51 PM
WOW! That's powerful stuff! 10 and that's the only 10 worth it I've seen so far.
replying on Zinnias are a funny flower by Bachus
30 Jan 2004, 8:45 PM
I get it and like it. 9
on In love as in war by zodiac
30 Jan 2004, 8:11 PM
I felt the thud-
-Ing. 9
-Ing. 9
on Lonely Hearts by cjg
30 Jan 2004, 7:56 PM
This is good. 8
on Of an Age Before by cleverdevice
30 Jan 2004, 7:53 PM
"long lush fronds" take us right out of the desert.
The contrast doesn't make sense.
The contrast doesn't make sense.
on Do you have a hard time... by <{Baba^Yaga}>
29 Jan 2004, 10:09 PM
500
lbs. of salty justice. That's a bit much. For any man!
lbs. of salty justice. That's a bit much. For any man!
replying on To Avalon by annabellee
29 Jan 2004, 10:02 PM
Thanks. It was good to see someone recognize this.
Iâm not sure Tennyson would approve. Although, I like to imagine he would at least commend the effort. Imitation is after all the highest form of flattery and in this case, brought inspiration to a word-weary poet. I like the changes you made to yours. Iâm sure Iâm nit picking but Iâm still not satisfied with <we be> it is better though. Iâm not familiar with the poem you mention. Iâll see if I can find it.
Iâm not sure Tennyson would approve. Although, I like to imagine he would at least commend the effort. Imitation is after all the highest form of flattery and in this case, brought inspiration to a word-weary poet. I like the changes you made to yours. Iâm sure Iâm nit picking but Iâm still not satisfied with <we be> it is better though. Iâm not familiar with the poem you mention. Iâll see if I can find it.