on Lonely Hearts by cjg
30 Jan 2004, 7:56 PM
This is good. 8
on some deleted poem
29 Jan 2004, 1:51 PM
<We been drawn>? Is this how you intended it?
Shades of Carl Sandburg. Nice! 9
Shades of Carl Sandburg. Nice! 9
on In love as in war by zodiac
30 Jan 2004, 8:11 PM
I felt the thud-
-Ing. 9
-Ing. 9
on some deleted poem
30 Jan 2004, 8:16 PM
on first glance I thought it read 'lousy river'
Which I liked! Nice. 7
Which I liked! Nice. 7
on How to sleep sitting up by Bachus
30 Jan 2004, 8:51 PM
WOW! That's powerful stuff! 10 and that's the only 10 worth it I've seen so far.
on Do you have a hard time... by <{Baba^Yaga}>
29 Jan 2004, 10:09 PM
500
lbs. of salty justice. That's a bit much. For any man!
lbs. of salty justice. That's a bit much. For any man!
on Of an Age Before by cleverdevice
30 Jan 2004, 7:53 PM
"long lush fronds" take us right out of the desert.
The contrast doesn't make sense.
The contrast doesn't make sense.