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20 most recent comments by god'swife (641-660) and replies

Re: fire by bxjay170 17-Dec-02/2:17 PM
shouldn't it be 'slip out their hands...' by the way we are not the only animals who kil for pleasure. Eatings a pleasure, and fuckings a pleasure, and so is being #1.
Re: a comment on alienheart by Bill Z Bub 13-Dec-02/9:56 PM
Good questions boy, but right now I have to go help an old lady get into bed. I'll tackle you tomorrow, sometime after noon. I am the TEEVEE generation. 6 yrs old 12" from the black and white, I watched us walking. On the moon.
I saw a Kennedy shot not once but twice.

Re: a comment on Panning for gold by INTRANSIT 13-Dec-02/2:10 PM
I would like to get tight with Zzinnia, that would loads of fun I'm certain. Can you pick me up where the 60 and the 605 meet, then drop me of and Zzinni's barn? I'll bring some 40 yr. old scotch and home-made empanadas. She can let me in on all the secrets.
Re: Panning for gold by INTRANSIT 13-Dec-02/8:34 AM
I'm still not sure what all the metaphors represent.
Re: Corny. by Plasticgirlwithgun 13-Dec-02/8:29 AM
Yeah, there is nothing cornier then a pierced septum!!??? Not to mention more poetic. why don't you get his name tattooed across the back of your neck.
Re: Panning for gold by INTRANSIT 12-Dec-02/5:05 PM
Is this a much smaller version? It seems to have lost some of it's emotion. Take out "while on another front". Can you images to create the shift in direction?
Re: a comment on Panning for gold by INTRANSIT 12-Dec-02/5:02 PM
I meant gullible in the most flattering sense of the word! Your innocent and authentic. You're not some poetry poser like the rest of us. Chivalry is not dead, Chivalry is not dead, Chivalry is not dead. Please help me Intransit, you're my only hope.
Re: a comment on Panning for gold by INTRANSIT 12-Dec-02/1:21 AM
You push to far. Stop making fun of the poor kid just because you've got cupcakes and factory sealed potato-chips, while he's got lunch-vouchers. I know you know what I mean, otherwise you wouldn't know how to be so cruel. Good-night, kiss the baby for me.
Re: a comment on Transformers "a higher, vaster, deeper meaning". by Bachus 12-Dec-02/1:16 AM
You think you deserve a trust fund just because you want one. Sure you talk the talk when you need to. I fear the whole world is sarting to believe you, don't forget I'm on your side. Be glad I'm on your side. I guess on nights like this you know who your friends are. I'm going to bed. Stop trying so hard. You're the best there is.
Re: a comment on Panning for gold by INTRANSIT 12-Dec-02/1:08 AM
It's not about lying down, and it's not about drinks. Haven't I made clear my Love? It's about kindness.
Re: Panning for gold by INTRANSIT 12-Dec-02/12:58 AM
You're moving along darlink! This piece is quite dark for someone so gullible. Will you marry me? 18-wheel me away from these hooligans? You can tie wood blocks to my shoes, and show me where the gears are. I'll drive, you'll write. Order me a pancake.
Re: Danse by Limness 12-Dec-02/12:33 AM
Get rid of 'it's sway' most importantly, also telling me you will tell me in some other poem turned my switch straight to off. Rough draft?
Re: a comment on Transformers "a higher, vaster, deeper meaning". by Bachus 12-Dec-02/12:22 AM
Rat King, of course.
Re: a comment on alienheart by Bill Z Bub 12-Dec-02/12:18 AM
Is that so wrong??? He's 6 foot even. The beard makes him look rough, nasty. It's easier with the boy if he's not here in the morning. Joey likes pancakes, for my love it's oatmeal.
Re: a comment on Transformers "a higher, vaster, deeper meaning". by Bachus 12-Dec-02/12:13 AM
80cc's of air at between 33 and 66 ft. of salt water. I hold my breath because i'm a romantic; always expecting some happy ending. We had champagne and cake to celebrate. The flutes played Tchaikovsky's dance.
Re: a comment on alienheart by Bill Z Bub 12-Dec-02/12:06 AM
We each have work in the morning, otherwise he'd be here all night. He's warm, and big- tall I mean. He grew a beard for me. He loves me.
Re: a comment on alienheart by Bill Z Bub 12-Dec-02/12:02 AM
Oh yeah, television references, they're useless, that's my point. I went to a party about 5 years ago and everybody was taking t.v and movies. I said to someone, "whatever happened to the literary reference". They said "she left for better climes".
Re: a comment on alienheart by Bill Z Bub 11-Dec-02/11:58 PM
yes I'm drunk. No my lover just left. What was the next question?
Re: a comment on Transformers "a higher, vaster, deeper meaning". by Bachus 11-Dec-02/11:51 PM
I can hold my breath for 2 minutes. I can make an 80 last an hour and a half at 2atms.
Re: a comment on alienheart by Bill Z Bub 11-Dec-02/11:48 PM
Of course you do, that's my point . Who needs to see it on television?


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