regarding some deleted poem...	27-Aug-02/6:44 PM
You're right.
regarding some deleted poem...	27-Aug-02/6:48 PM
p.s. I wasn't complaining about you. Never once did i mention you. I hold no grudge.
regarding some deleted poem...	27-Aug-02/6:50 PM
why are you so angry? Tell me what it is you want. Short statements please so i can understand. I'm not the least bit angry with you.
Re: Comparisons by anagram	27-Aug-02/6:53 PM
Can I get back to you in a minute, I'm trying to understand what's going on with dark angel. I don't want to ignore you
regarding some deleted poem...	27-Aug-02/6:57 PM
o'k' I think i was able to gleen at least one request, you would like me to stop warning people that their character is going to be assasinated. But the truth is some people not,you in particular, do make negative personal comments.
regarding some deleted poem...	27-Aug-02/7:17 PM
o.k. I targeted you at first because you were the first person I noticed who was making personal stabs at people, on more then one occasion I might add. Then with time I realized it was an actual trend on this sight. The reason I choose to "warn" newcomers was because I wanted them to be able to stay on long enough to understand that there was more going on here then poem/people bashing. This site has alot of merit.I mean the reason I keep coming back is because the people here are actually smart and have something to say. Even this cyber- sparing, what do i mean sparing, this is out and out battling, with you is good for my brain. I've visited other poetry forums and there bland at best. Everythings smilely faces and fairies and rainbows.So tell me what else you need me to do, so you won't be upset (and i'm not being sarcastic)
regarding some deleted poem...	27-Aug-02/7:20 PM
I think we keep mis-reading each other because we can't hear any tone of voice. It adds alot. I am neither righteous or indignant.
Re: Suicide III by disturbedone182	27-Aug-02/7:35 PM
You know p&k the more time I spend going through random poetry the more I want to agree with you. Well atually you couldn't be more correct, but their just looking for someplace to post their stuff. Maybe we should have a referral site for teenage angst.
regarding some deleted poem...	27-Aug-02/7:58 PM
This is more adolescent then a wet dream. As for raping the English; and so her did I pretty much takes care of that. Is it skank cherry pie' that's suppose to propel this thing to the heights? Just like Daddy always says some people post their poetry only because it pleases them.0
Re: father Worked Nights by poetandknowit	27-Aug-02/8:01 PM
Hey Swishy, post some poetry.
Re: Comparisons by anagram	27-Aug-02/8:08 PM
Wait one second this Angel's working, in the poem it says sh'es sleeping I' confuseded. Please explain.
regarding some deleted poem...	27-Aug-02/9:57 PM
I never said it wasn't beautiful, I said it was good, sorry if i sound condescending, I'm sincere. It is beautiful.
Re: father Worked Nights by poetandknowit	27-Aug-02/10:11 PM
Anotherday242: on your profile it says you signed up to receive comments by e-mail, but you posted no poetry. So you can't. Post something.
regarding some deleted poem...	27-Aug-02/10:20 PM
I just want to warn you their are people on this site who will say this poem sucks. Count me in.
Re: Tryst by <~>	27-Aug-02/10:45 PM
This made me laugh when i read it the first time. I can't figure out why. I think it's fine as is. The past tense verbs work well together. And the self awareness at the end, is like guilt after doing the deed. Moments pleasure vs. lifetime of regret.
Re: denied by <~>	27-Aug-02/10:52 PM
ZeeZee, I think i'm gonna have to give this a 3. If i voted on it as verse it would rank an 8 possibly but as poetry it leaves me wanting.
regarding some deleted poem...	27-Aug-02/10:56 PM
thank you V. Keep singing.
Re: denied by <~>	27-Aug-02/10:59 PM
No, song lyrics can be poetry. I'm just a sucker for metaphor. It's like offering someone choc. chip when they always want raspberry swirl.
Re: Senses of Time by searching	27-Aug-02/11:07 PM
I was going to give this a 2 but then the last line moved everything up 4 notches.
Re: Tryst by <~>	27-Aug-02/11:14 PM
Just don't forget about her. Call her in 2 weeks, see how she's doing. Buy her a new pair of shoes.