regarding some deleted poem...	2-Sep-02/8:41 AM
Yes well it was written under the spell of a very sexy man. I'll try e-mailing you today. It's labor day here. The whole nation's on holiday, expect of course for the major stores and restaurants. It was so hot yesterday the rubber seals on my car windows started melting.
Re: The Astronomer's Lament by Christof	2-Sep-02/8:45 AM
The more I read this the more it speaks. 5 yrs. is a long time, and they never collided did they? They fell apart.
regarding some deleted poem...	2-Sep-02/8:52 AM
I don't know what you're talking about, but I still like this. She's upset. Acouple of littl things i'd obsess over working out, but there really not even impportant enough to mention.
regarding some deleted poem...	2-Sep-02/8:53 AM
when random's not random it's torture.
regarding some deleted poem...	2-Sep-02/9:01 AM
He's this amazingly talented painter. Bastard son of a well respected local Dr. and a working class Mexican girl. He's completely insane. We were completely in love, but it was so intense and so conflicted we ended up torturing each other. We were dying together, and I probably would have been willing to continue if it weren't for my boy. The boy saved me. You'll be seeing more of him. November's Fugitive is about him. I'll repost it.
regarding some deleted poem...	2-Sep-02/9:04 AM
Also the last stanza in Untitled I wrote in my head when I ran into him last winter.
regarding some deleted poem...	2-Sep-02/9:07 AM
I'm the luckiest girl in the world.
Re: somewhere between alpha and omega by crin	2-Sep-02/9:15 AM
I don't know who could have given this a zero. It's well balanced and pretty. The 1st & 2nd stanzas are perfectly constructed. This would make a great song. And the last line reminds of how foolish it is to fall in love.
regarding some deleted poem...	2-Sep-02/9:21 AM
It's OK now. I have a great life. I'm surrounded by beautiful, loving, smart people. I wouldn't change a thing. I hope someday to feel that kind of intensity again, but I still know how blessed I am to have all I have.
Re: The Astronomer's Lament by Christof	2-Sep-02/9:26 AM
A beauty indeed. Sweet Selene, even the tides arrange themselves to her mood.
Re: wHEN mY wATER rUNS dRY by Sigh'ense...	2-Sep-02/9:35 AM
I love the sentiment but the last lines in the first and second stanzas frustrate me. I want them to glide better.
Re: somewhere between alpha and omega by crin	2-Sep-02/11:53 AM
I always love pretty things. There's no grandeur in crin's poem. Maybe you've got some wrong ideas about me.
regarding some deleted poem...	2-Sep-02/6:25 PM
Bravo! Excellent writing.
regarding some deleted poem...	2-Sep-02/6:30 PM
Original use of words and images. A bit confusing especially stanza 3. Who cares.
Re: Through the eyes of life by Angel_of_fait	2-Sep-02/9:22 PM
For the sake of my own sanity I'm going to believe you're actually a grown-up pretending to be a 14yr old who writes bad poetry. This can't be serious. It's completely illogical that someone who can read could write this poorly.
Re: Autumn Songs by timfowler	2-Sep-02/9:25 PM
What exactly is it you're about?
Re: you're never alone by nentwined	2-Sep-02/9:26 PM
What exactly are you writing about?
Re: God's Rod (toilet drink poem) by horus8	2-Sep-02/9:40 PM
Terrific. Came up on random. The jesus/devil metaphors are funny and, best of all, accurate. The last stanza is pure sunday school.
regarding some deleted poem...	3-Sep-02/7:38 AM
To "Cry uncle" is an American colloquilism. It's a game played as a child. You chase someone down and hold them there, all the while spitting in their face or applying nuggies, (do have nuggies in England?) til they say the word 'uncle'. Then you let them go. It's a game used to establish pecking ordered. I never thought about it being an Americanism.
Re: Conversation Piece by timfowler	3-Sep-02/7:48 AM
Nice, The :'s and the ;'s are distracting especially in the 1st & 2nd lines. Maybe they have some cryptic meaning I'm to obtuse to understand. In the last stanza the prep. phrase is so long I forgot what the subject of the sentence was. Awkward. Nice but awkward.