poemranker ::20 most recent comments by wordherd and replies

Comments bywordherd, the 20 most recent, including replies. Only comments on poems

on girl of eden [the shotgun approach] by boogah 10 Aug 2002, 4:48 PM
nice title, nice concept, shitty poem!
on Stranded by Antares42 10 Aug 2002, 4:46 PM
the concept is good, thought a bit over done, but your rhyme scheme and weak language ruin any chance of it being remotly poetic!
on WANTED by JanieDoe 10 Aug 2002, 4:40 PM
nice, but please don't tell me how to read it!
on You are the Rain by emilyowey 5 Aug 2002, 8:53 AM
nice try, have you ever hear the word cliche?
on Reality by ThoughtfulSoul 5 Aug 2002, 8:51 AM
i don't like the poem, but props for the subject matter
on Wife beater t-shirt by bondjedi 4 Aug 2002, 8:34 PM
i like it
on Orange by lindseyis 4 Aug 2002, 7:55 PM
nice imagry and a play with line breaks might be good
on Thoughts for Later (v3) by nentwined 4 Aug 2002, 7:54 PM
cliche and boring