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girl of eden [the shotgun approach] (Free verse) by boogah
i dream of her eyes
her body
her legs
her breasts like sweet buds
blossoming like roses
do not
[not for any
set reason]
touch her
for she is a
fragile
beautiful thing
that should not be harmed
[or lost in the grinding din
of the world]
i feel her soft
cool breeze
[when she whispers]
against my skin
i smell her smell
and it pleases me
she's like baby's
breath and candy canes
and all those other fine
fine things
so let us sit
in her pure glistening
light
and maybe we can
lose ourselves
possibly we could
lose the night
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.4666667
Weighted score: 4.5302415
Overall Rank: 12726
Posted: May 10, 2002 10:11 AM PDT; Last modified: May 10, 2002 10:11 AM PDT
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