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Thoughts for Later (v3) (Free verse) by nentwined
I made a list (and checked it twice) -- idea scraps all laid out nice for later. I took my list (and pondered it) -- and scratched off things that didn't fit for later. when later comes, I'll take a line and ponder it (attack with mind), an' if creation should occur I'll wipe it out for later.

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.866667
Weighted score: 6.864966
Overall Rank: 285
Posted: April 23, 2002 1:07 AM PDT; Last modified: April 23, 2002 2:03 AM PDT
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Comments:
[n/a] wordherd @ 24.93.210.35 | 4-Aug-02/7:54 PM | Reply
cliche and boring
[8] Shuushin @ 70.16.209.52 | 2-Jan-05/12:53 PM | Reply
sure, I like it.
[0] conny lingers @ 127.0.0.1 | 2-Feb-21/9:15 AM | Reply
ungrammatical.
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