| Re: Thoughts for Later (v3) by nentwined |
4-Aug-02/7:54 PM |
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| Re: Orange by lindseyis |
4-Aug-02/7:55 PM |
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nice imagry and a play with line breaks might be good
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
4-Aug-02/8:32 PM |
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your abusing your readers
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| Re: Wife beater t-shirt by bondjedi |
4-Aug-02/8:34 PM |
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| Re: Reality by ThoughtfulSoul |
5-Aug-02/8:51 AM |
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i don't like the poem, but props for the subject matter
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| Re: You are the Rain by emilyowey |
5-Aug-02/8:53 AM |
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nice try, have you ever hear the word cliche?
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7-Aug-02/9:06 AM |
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| Re: WANTED by JanieDoe |
10-Aug-02/4:40 PM |
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nice, but please don't tell me how to read it!
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| Re: Stranded by Antares42 |
10-Aug-02/4:46 PM |
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the concept is good, thought a bit over done, but your rhyme scheme and weak language ruin any chance of it being remotly poetic!
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| Re: girl of eden [the shotgun approach] by boogah |
10-Aug-02/4:48 PM |
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nice title, nice concept, shitty poem!
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
10-Aug-02/4:49 PM |
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
10-Aug-02/4:53 PM |
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your begging for it angel-you should'nt have written this poem, and yes, no one cares!
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