poemranker ::20 most recent comments by wordherd

Comments bywordherd, the 20 most recent. Include replies

on some deleted poem 4 Aug 2002, 8:32 PM
your abusing your readers
on Thoughts for Later (v3) by nentwined 4 Aug 2002, 7:54 PM
cliche and boring
on some deleted poem 7 Aug 2002, 9:06 AM
nice list poem
on Stranded by Antares42 10 Aug 2002, 4:46 PM
the concept is good, thought a bit over done, but your rhyme scheme and weak language ruin any chance of it being remotly poetic!
on girl of eden [the shotgun approach] by boogah 10 Aug 2002, 4:48 PM
nice title, nice concept, shitty poem!
on some deleted poem 10 Aug 2002, 4:53 PM
your begging for it angel-you should'nt have written this poem, and yes, no one cares!
on Reality by ThoughtfulSoul 5 Aug 2002, 8:51 AM
i don't like the poem, but props for the subject matter
on You are the Rain by emilyowey 5 Aug 2002, 8:53 AM
nice try, have you ever hear the word cliche?
on Orange by lindseyis 4 Aug 2002, 7:55 PM
nice imagry and a play with line breaks might be good
on WANTED by JanieDoe 10 Aug 2002, 4:40 PM
nice, but please don't tell me how to read it!
on Wife beater t-shirt by bondjedi 4 Aug 2002, 8:34 PM
i like it
on some deleted poem 10 Aug 2002, 4:49 PM
so what!