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Stranded (Free verse) by Antares42 I find myself sitting on the side of the road
Watching life pass me by.
I don't know why I stopped
For I can only cry.
Which way leads to life I may never know
Because I cannot figure out how to make myself go.
No one else can understand how hypnotizing life can be when you stop to
look
I am alone here on the side of the road
Watching it pass me by.
I may be alone here
Until the day I die.
Up the ladder:
Chicken Tonight
Down the ladder:
Rebel Wind
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Posted: August 10, 2002 2:43 PM PDT; Last modified: August 10, 2002 2:43 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.506941 Overall Rank: 12780 Comments:
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wordherd @ 24.93.210.35
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10-Aug-02/4:46 PM
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the concept is good, thought a bit over done, but your rhyme scheme and weak language ruin any chance of it being remotly poetic!
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