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20 most recent comments by Bachus (1161-1180)

Re: sky by youngweirdo 18-Aug-02/6:00 AM
Good morning Z..It's morning ..right? I am truly mother's beach towel..coming mother..she heard that.
Re: Just Another Day by dougsoderstrom 18-Aug-02/6:09 AM
Doug , mother and I are very proud! what a wonderful tone and mood you've instilled. I like beer. I hate work. I love love puddles. I hate messes. I don't hate you anymore. As an editor to mother I would recommend ending at "I love you" 1 pick, or "good night honey" 2 pick, or "sweet dreams" 3 pick 8/10 (just cuz I've been sinking your other shite)t
regarding some deleted poem... 18-Aug-02/7:18 AM
Actually, i'm far to intelligent and compulsively organized to subject Micah to anything other than pure love, patience and my undivided attention (don't fucking ever use my words against me or assume such diabolical shit as that.. you stereo typing fuck) First off being an industry brat does not allow one to be "homophobic" because hollywood is run by the velvet maffia you twit. david geffin, barry diller the list goes on and on, my son's god father is david weisman producer of ciao manhattan (also flaming gay), and kiss of the spiderwoman. also i have had some great relationships sexually and emotionally with the same sex so, "whatever" ( i was gonna say something else,but you're not worth it, i thought you were but that's what i get for thinking and <being honest>)...secondly i have three different abodes, one for each of my head trips, but when i'm at "home" with my son (in west hollywood) i focus on him like i focus on my writing, piano,guitar, singing,acting,painting,sculpting, or whatever it is that i'm absorbing at the time it's called being a father, providing the space and money that is needed to properly provide for a child, not to mention the fact that his mother is only 21, and is practically a child herself. i pay for her college, watch him while she goes to school, i stayed three days solid in the hospital when he was born and loved every minute of it, cut the cord, and did my stint(i was going to be medical dr. at one time in my life, so it was actually very interesting and much easier than everyone thinks)..i'm really fucking irate right now man cuz i am a great father, my father was in prison 13 years of my life and i swore that i would be the opposite of that asshole when it came to my son, my problems are with myself not treating myself right.drugs, excess on every level imaginable, but those two areas of my life don't cross because i'm a sick fucking functioning addict and when i'm hurting myself i stay far away from home (usually at the studio in venice or new york, or amsterdam, i am not a belligerant lunatic on any level in front of my family, and even when i'm doing hard drugs by myself i do it with pride and class, to the extent were it's totally unoticable hence the term "functioning", but i gurantee you haven't done heroin, or speed or cocaine, or hallucinogenics to the extent that i have, therefore your point is hollow and cowardly..so unless your mother would tie you up in the back yard and leave you alone for days at a time, or unless you have shot up so much smack you've woken up with a collapsed lung, or your father was prison you're entire life, or you have had to raise and support two children(i had to teach micahs mother how to drive, cook, clean,read and write, because she had even worse parents then me) as an underground artist. .i really don't think you can even begin to grasp what i'm dealing with over here, and even if you did it wouldn't matter cuz the "to each his own rule" takes presidence.. my relationship with my son and his mother is story book normal we spend massive amounts of time doing what "normal" family's do, which is a powerful soberic device for me "cuz i'm about as normal as jeff buckley drowning in the wolf river. regardless it's called self control and the need to balance the good with the bad, now i'm not saying that when i'm creating a character for a movie, or a play, i don't dissappear for a while i do..that's my job..to create a color intense for whoever the director is that i'm working with, to bring the screen plays writer's words to life..i work very fucking hardto equip myself with the tools to be directed and perform up to standards i always do my homework from acting to child rearing, or say i'm touring with a band for a few weeks or a month or two, yeah i get fucked up, but i don't intertact with my son under any of those circumstances, it's not like he's on the bus being passed around by a bunch of groupies...his mother hates all forms of substance abuse, she doesn't even swear for the love of jesu, which is why and how we have been able to pull of the impossible task of creating a good family environment around impossible odds... he's having a hard enough time learning how to piss in the toilet without me complicating things for him..there are many levels to living mr. earth walker, (not that you've fucking walked anywhere) assuming that you no vaguely or intimitely the relationship i had with my mother,. father, son, or girlfriend is just rfeaching into an area that you have no map for, no friends in, and not enough openmindedness to appreciate. next time i want to be honest and open up to a person, i'll think twice, because you are obviously use to a different setting and cycle than what i've just broken down for you, funny thing is i barely scratched the surface, do me a favor don't fucking ever, FUCKING EVER, think that you have the balls or the gaul to go there, because you don't and i'm not the kind of motherfucker you want as an enemy. got that. i hope so. you fucking piece of fucking talentless speculation!
Re: Dear Ms. Sexton by <{Baba^Yaga}> 18-Aug-02/7:33 AM
that mother fucking son off a bitch earth fuck.fuck.you spineless fuck i demand you show the comment i just posted in response to your big fucking lecture. i spent the last t20 minutes writing that and if you dont show these good people my reply i will fucking go out of my weay to make sure your cowardly ass, is known as a fucking legless cunt! MOTHERFUCKER1DON'T EVER FUCKING USE MY WORDS AGAINST ME LIKE THAT AND THEN ZAP MY REPLY YOU FUCKINGT PIECE OF FUCKING TALENTLESS SPECULATION...my reply was beatiful and said alot about certain things, but no you can't have any real competition can you, just put your fucking two cents out there to taunt and then when i reply you fucking erase my comment. who in the fuck do you think you are. i don't give a fuck if yoiu're nentwined dude, i spent the better part of a half an hour writing that, just so you could erase it and make me look like an asshole and an irresponsible father. YOU BETTER HOPE I DON'T FIND OUT WHO YOU ARE FUCKER, cuz i will be glad to invest in paying you a visit you fucking spineless piece of shit. i fucking opened up and appologiuzed to you, and this is what i get.you asshole are n ot an earthwalker you are fucking anti everything that's beautiful..i can not believed you fucking did that.what a fucking crock..if i see you dude..EVER!i will gladly go to jail for the time i spend choking you blind got that. don't you fucking ever talk shit about my family, or my friendsn
Re: Reno by <{Baba^Yaga}> 18-Aug-02/7:40 AM
i'm sorry z..but i'm mfucking livid right now.. i wrote my ass off to comment on that fucks spittle and he pulled my shit off..what a fucking joke.. FUCKI.;LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOU. i hate little fat assed techie creeps like that fuck.what a pussy ass fucking creep man to erase another mans m,essage is just "bottomless" yeah da i said bottomless you FUCK, think that shits funny huh..haiku writing fat ass starbucks visiting sell outs. i demand you fucki9ng repost those two messages god damnit..that's fucking censorship beyond the norm.. bullshit!
Re: "On My Love" by Blake 18-Aug-02/7:48 AM
perhaps you should, you both have loads in common..loads of fucking shite as writing that goes straight into the shredder.. have of my poems blake are from taking your drivel and rearranging it with a word shredder..comes out perfect! fucking sorry ass bad BAD TALENTLESS FUCKING WRITING what's the point of even putting together a comment on this shit.. no matter hoiw many decorationsw and spices you put on it..it's just boring, palm greased, unmoving trash.FUCK..I WANT kaolin to speak up and repost that, i fucking demand to represent my feedback on earthfyckers dirty little lowe blow.. fucking spineless cock suckersFUCKI1111111111111111111111111111111111111TL6F;YPG;YBP8YLYBLBLYLKIRC6 KI RCEXUJ5EUJCRKIVt
Re: A Voice Found by Blake 18-Aug-02/8:04 AM
that's it i'm just going to turn all fucking "bvlakish poets on this site into earth talker until my comment is returned you fucking droll, booooorrring,. peach colored poets...GANGBOX

Fuck you
I'm so fucking sick of you
And your fucking pathetic
Way of thinking
So go fuck yourself
And while you're at it
Take your lame fucking people with you
I'm sick of their
Fucking mindless chatter
You force your demented fucking chaos
Onto me
And into me
So here's some back your way
You stupid fucking control freak
If I catch you even fucking thinking about me
I will hunt your fucking tainted ass down
And sodomize you
And every other fucking innocent bystander
Directly
Or indirectly
In my way
Do I make myself fucking clear?
Are you catching my fucking drift?
How fucking retarded were you
At the fucking time
When you created
This fucking fuck-fest
Of a place
You have us firmly planted in
You fucking pestilence
With no cure
Fuck you
I say
Fuck you

JBH 2-97
Re: Reno by <{Baba^Yaga}> 18-Aug-02/9:13 AM
no it wasn't.. he knows what his comment said before he pulled it.. and i know what it said, and i fucking hate spineless wannabe "intelectuals" who assume there lifes away, so fucking ugly and fat they dare not leave the house..which is why my friend Bachus wrote a little piece called why i want to kill opie recently....i don't like people talking about my son or my family, or my friends in idahoian bits..it's pathetic and false..i enjoy dealing with a person who doesn't FUCKING MUMBLE AND GIGGLE and use big words like "homophobic", just cause they've had there thumbs in their own arses for so long they're starting to squiggle, fucking ryan thorstad wannabes, you can't be like ryan he is open minded and full of bright ideas that go way beyond pulling comments..notice eart fuckers shit has suddenly vanished..what a crock of shit..i'm so fucking sick of dealing wwith the uppity uppercrust, they're so witty and dexterious, but if it comes down to actually conversing about a certain topic they're no where to be found..cuz they're so clever and lol! hey earthsmocker i got your homophobia right here dude in the form of my tight muscular shaved ass you fucking spineless cockholdh
Re: Dear Ms. Sexton by <{Baba^Yaga}> 18-Aug-02/9:23 AM
first off sweety bachus, is baba yaga, is horus 8, it's called being well rounded and style oriented, and the reason i was fucking cussing so much is because i don't appreciate spineless talentless cowards mentioning certain members of my family (my son micah) as being tortured and me as being homophobic if you like the song i'll send you a live acoustic version, just email horus8 an address.. okay okay.now i am going to take my family to the beach now, so that i can torture my son and put on my best homophobic posture, i have to laugh now of course cuz it's just so far from reality, but still my son is off limits to spineless lacklusters..who can't even control their weight let alone make an honest debate out of a topic.
Re: Black Buns by Bachus 18-Aug-02/9:50 AM
really sounds to me like you can't take it nigger, nigger, nigger, spook,dike wop,whore,chink,slope,jungle bunny,grow up you fucking short sided little girl, this piece is about the outrageous amount of money athletes make not only throwing balls to eachother, but also endorsing shit food with no nutritional values, why is it that docters or fireman don't get nike commercial or burgerking commercials..i'll telll you why cuz people like you are too evergreen to notice major gaps in our society as that..we'll pay some fucking athlete what 20 million to throw an orange ball through a hoop, and say "ummm that wopper sure was good, but a cop 30,000, or a cardioligist 100,000 grand for saving a thousand lives in a year oh but you didn't make that connection did you everspleen, cuz your to busy worrying about my mental health..what a joke..you are truly "ever green" green as they get behind the ears your cunt, your ass your entire existence..enjoy your whopperr
Re: Black Buns by Bachus 18-Aug-02/5:39 PM
You ever get the feeling that your playing chess with yourself D.A cuz your just so incredibly trained and intimidating that the competition cowers dirty kneed in your enormous pear assed shadow to whisper unearned praises into the ears of earless minions....yes here at poemranker there's a chain of command complete with stubby pencils and a locked chit box. No, of course you don't what would be the point in that. you who bravely bucks all trends and styles. The crusader of cutting edge state of the art thinking. The octapus of jesu'. After all it's not 'cool' unless it gets a check mark at your desk first. aye. You know, i have to say that i have never had more fun spreading the "good word", as i am here and now. Interacting with 'real artists who aren't afraid to quit there jobs and put it all on the line for the art of spoken word distribution. I have so much respect for writers and artists that spend their time between working for the man, and creating great works of genius, only to never do a thing withit, because we all know that it's so much more interesting to live ones life never taking any long term creative chances, such as moving to new york, or l.a, or paris and interacting with artists who actually make a 'living' doing what it is they love doing living inbetween their drive to change the way people think, and the fact that most people never have the guts to leave the stability of their parents house in say maybe bfe missouri to take a fucking chance at making a difference where it counts, with the people who control what other people become interested in. People don't go to see triple x, because it's a movie that will 'change their lives'. they go and see it because its the in thing, hip and full of rewarding visuals. why fucking even paint with canvassd anymore when there's photoshop, why move to paris to write along the same paths that rimbaud traversed when there's poemranker. Why read a fucking book or any of the classics when there's books on tape and video games to play. why watch a black and white movie with no sound. When there's million pixeled digitally enhanced thx surround sound themeless movie screens on every corner. Why sketch your lover when you could just take her picture. Why meet a friend for a walk when there's e-mail.. why go outside when there's everything you ever dreamed of inside, why even move a muscle when you can just hook up the ab shocker 10000 at twitch your muscles into shape. why socialize when you can internalize and get less friction and feedback, yes my friends we are most assuredly living the ultimate capitalistic dream of our forefathers. if you are listening generation 'Y'= why bother! stay in missoura, we're filled to capacity anyway with 'red herring' and lemmings join a militia in montana instead at least you can still fucking smoke in restaurants there. p.s evergreen, if your considering quitting your day job to take a chance in other creative circles. don't cuz within a months time you would be nevergreen again but i would also be forced to respect your attempt and desire to live the 'word' and not pretend that you serve the 'words' more genuinely and originally from the middle of your couch left handing a bag of fucking stale fritos. don't be afraid sweetheart every forest has to burn to the ground eventually in order to re-nourish the land in the hopes of a greener future.
Re: Powder Blue by [mojo] 18-Aug-02/6:06 PM
even after starin at the powdered blue screen of poemranker for the last 15 hours, could not deprive this colorful piece of it's worthiness. splendid and candid!@
Re: Pi'd Piper by [mojo] 18-Aug-02/6:10 PM
piping hot and interestingly aloof. more aloof then an aloofa in the mold speckled corner of the shower. i'm off to see a play, my fucking fingers are bleeding, and my eyelids are revolting! 9/10
regarding some deleted poem... 19-Aug-02/12:35 AM
But darling he's haS no teefuses. I love the occasional gumming tormentor
regarding some deleted poem... 19-Aug-02/12:40 AM
not at all..he's an author of a few popular fantasy sagas..you know..he's english too for christ's sake look him up..he was quite influential with his vast amount of scrollings, similiar to say frank herbert or mr. piers anthony, and a one richard adams..
Re: Intense Irrational Realities by Venus 19-Aug-02/12:43 AM
oh..baby i was bound for mexico...oh baby i was bound to let you down oh oh ohohoh..
Re: the song of snow by marjan 19-Aug-02/1:11 AM
A stirring ballad to all spring detesting snow men..
regarding some deleted poem... 19-Aug-02/1:16 AM
But that was then and this is now
And true love can never be gauged
They beat the odds and he's living sober with love day to day.
Re: purple by youngweirdo 19-Aug-02/1:31 AM
a cripples nipple so simple, supple, purple, with just an early tinge of a reddish pimple..see both cheeks bear that supple dimple. then...no smile, only the madness of dying grapes blood. feet pumping! thumping! feeling. purple>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>throbbing member antics burst a bad veins purpuse.purple
regarding some deleted poem... 19-Aug-02/1:34 AM
beyond what? a torn eight year olds desked hustler magazine? i think it needs a naughty ghost handed pickle. who knows next year you might be writing for big jugs or ebony lips, one can only aspire to dream of such accomplishments


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