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purple (Free verse) by youngweirdo
How come no word rhymes with purple? Now that sort of question is hurtful. It could damage one's thaughts, And wouldn't hesitate to taunt, Feeble minds so shallow that they cant bare it. It is as rotten as shit, And i hate thinking it. Cos no single word i know rhymes with purple!

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.75
Weighted score: 4.663823
Overall Rank: 12252
Posted: August 19, 2002 1:17 AM PDT; Last modified: August 19, 2002 1:17 AM PDT
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[5] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 | 19-Aug-02/1:31 AM | Reply
a cripples nipple so simple, supple, purple, with just an early tinge of a reddish pimple..see both cheeks bear that supple dimple. then...no smile, only the madness of dying grapes blood. feet pumping! thumping! feeling. purple>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>throbbing member antics burst a bad veins purpuse.purple
[n/a] youngweirdo @ | 19-Aug-02/6:31 AM | Reply
sounds good B.maybe you should put that in as one of your poems.
[2] <~> @ 24.44.185.41 | 19-Aug-02/6:46 PM | Reply
this poem damages my thaughts.
[8] Tascobar @ 193.130.87.54 | 6-Sep-02/6:25 AM | Reply
I like your thinking - you may be young, you may also be wierd, but I'll follow your work. 8. Also nothing rhymes with "orange", which pisses me off.
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 81.86.113.159 | 6-Sep-02/7:21 AM | Reply
There is no poetry here. I searched for hours with a magnifying glass and tweezers. No poetry.
[n/a] Christof @ 195.172.133.226 | 6-Sep-02/7:48 AM | Reply
Turtle. That's the closest I can get. But really, who cares?
[6] ==Doylum @ 213.122.169.77 | 6-Sep-02/7:56 AM | Reply
Ah the Purple Turtle, a most hallowed place, and an old favorite, why did they knock it down? why did they move it? Why banish it up town. A most mystical of places, no more. Howl howl howl, you are determined to bring darkness into my world. Oh well whats for supper.
[6] ==Doylum @ 213.122.169.77 | 6-Sep-02/7:59 AM | Reply
you must be a telewacker of the after dark club.
[n/a] Christof @ 195.172.133.226 | 6-Sep-02/8:01 AM | Reply
Belive me I'm not trying to bring the blackness to your life Doylum. But I can't help it if the overarching darkness of life is so bleakly apparent today. Perhaps it is the end.
[6] ==Doylum @ 213.122.169.77 | 6-Sep-02/8:04 AM | Reply
No never for i now have wings
[n/a] Nicholas Jones @ 137.44.1.200 | 9-Oct-02/5:47 AM | Reply
There is poetry here. Of course there is. But it's not very good.
[5] Jill Stockinger @ 0:0:0:0:0:0:0:1 | 27-Dec-20/4:47 PM | Reply
Furple is the name of a purple paint: Furple purple-!
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