on some deleted poem
13 Oct 2003, 3:26 PM
good poem, liked it
on some deleted poem
13 Oct 2003, 3:29 PM
ha ha, fits me to a tee as well, 10
on NUMERO UNO by gorbichoff
13 Oct 2003, 7:46 PM
pretty good, write some more 10
on So you want to be a father by april fool
18 Oct 2003, 7:02 PM
thats the sign of a good father no doubt, but giving away money to make the life of your family better is not what matters, but it is good to be selfless as a father 10
on some deleted poem
18 Oct 2003, 8:49 AM
great poem, keep up the good work :)
on some deleted poem
18 Oct 2003, 8:52 AM
good poem, i would have chosen less colourful words for the last line, but thats just me
on My Guardian Angel by ramtheman1
18 Oct 2003, 8:55 AM
may i suggest something? you can't assume someone is in heaven, not at all, all we can say is we hope they are and keep praying for them. good poem though 10
on some deleted poem
18 Oct 2003, 6:40 PM
great poem, i like it 10
on some deleted poem
13 Sep 2003, 10:27 PM
great poem
on some deleted poem
6 Sep 2003, 8:52 PM
its good,keep up the good work
on 'Till Then by sliver
6 Sep 2003, 11:25 PM
incredible, good work, very emotional, write more
on some deleted poem
5 Sep 2003, 7:32 PM
loved it, let's hear some more
on some deleted poem
5 Sep 2003, 7:33 PM
good good, more more
on Gone (75) by shadowaura
5 Sep 2003, 8:09 PM
i liked it, it showed good emotion, write more
on some deleted poem
12 Sep 2003, 9:41 PM
truly inspiring :P
10/10
10/10
on some deleted poem
7 Oct 2003, 9:29 AM
good poem
on Here I go again by tadpole
7 Oct 2003, 9:30 AM
good poem, 10
on On the Occasion by tadpole
7 Oct 2003, 9:32 AM
good poem, and sliver, can't you see that that was about the angels? i knew rigth away, open your eyes :P~
on some deleted poem
10 Oct 2003, 1:43 PM
good job, keep up the good work, pay no attention to the jerks who have no respect for anything, write more, 10/10