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5-Sep-03/7:32 PM |
loved it, let's hear some more
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Re: Gone (75) by shadowaura |
5-Sep-03/8:09 PM |
i liked it, it showed good emotion, write more
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6-Sep-03/8:52 PM |
its good,keep up the good work
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Re: 'Till Then by sliver |
6-Sep-03/11:25 PM |
incredible, good work, very emotional, write more
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Re: Here I go again by tadpole |
7-Oct-03/9:30 AM |
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Re: On the Occasion by tadpole |
7-Oct-03/9:32 AM |
good poem, and sliver, can't you see that that was about the angels? i knew rigth away, open your eyes :P~
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10-Oct-03/1:43 PM |
good job, keep up the good work, pay no attention to the jerks who have no respect for anything, write more, 10/10
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13-Oct-03/3:29 PM |
ha ha, fits me to a tee as well, 10
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Re: NUMERO UNO by gorbichoff |
13-Oct-03/7:46 PM |
pretty good, write some more 10
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Re: Nicole by sliver |
17-Oct-03/8:03 PM |
great poem, i can feel the emotion, keep up the good work 10
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18-Oct-03/8:49 AM |
great poem, keep up the good work :)
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18-Oct-03/8:52 AM |
good poem, i would have chosen less colourful words for the last line, but thats just me
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Re: My Guardian Angel by ramtheman1 |
18-Oct-03/8:55 AM |
may i suggest something? you can't assume someone is in heaven, not at all, all we can say is we hope they are and keep praying for them. good poem though 10
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Re: So you want to be a father by april fool |
18-Oct-03/7:02 PM |
thats the sign of a good father no doubt, but giving away money to make the life of your family better is not what matters, but it is good to be selfless as a father 10
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