| Re: Crack baby by Caducus |
7-Jul-05/7:54 AM |
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Some great lines "seeded fruit and rotten core"
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| Re: a comment on A Christmas Thought by keatsImnot |
8-Dec-04/2:25 PM |
Dark Angel
Thanks for those encouraging words, a 10 score was very generous where can I go from here?
ps the missing word was day
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| Re: a comment on A Christmas Thought by keatsImnot |
8-Dec-04/2:22 PM |
Dovina
Is that a Michael Jackson bad
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| Re: A Christmas Thought by keatsImnot |
8-Dec-04/2:20 PM |
Dovina
Is that a Michael Jackson Bad.
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| Re: A Christmas Thought by keatsImnot |
8-Dec-04/2:18 PM |
Dark Angel
Thanks for the encouraging words it's much appreciated 10 is quite some score.
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| Re: Reply To the 9,000 Poets Against War. by Blue Magpie |
23-Feb-03/1:19 AM |
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This is good, great structure, killer punch line.
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| Re: The Gentleman by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
18-Feb-03/2:36 AM |
See you can do it, when you try.
Top marks.
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| Re: a comment on time by keatsImnot |
13-Feb-03/2:13 AM |
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Thanks for your comments, the "pollen sucked and dry" line I thought symbolised the distended and redundant breasts of a one time beauty and mother.
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| Re: the price of success by brazen |
12-Feb-03/5:06 AM |
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| Re: The Importance of Mr. Straughter by GregDeEgg |
12-Feb-03/1:45 AM |
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| Re: a comment on A christmas thought by keatsImnot |
21-Dec-02/1:20 PM |
It was a mistake deleting your comments, I wished to reply to you but alas pressed the cross. This poem is somewhat immature, but I was twelve when I wrote it. I appreciate your comments, and as you probably understand from a comment I addded to one of your poems "child of my anus" I hold your work in high esteem, to have munificent dark angel critise one of my humble offerings, would be be akin to Carlos Santana giving me some advice on my guitar playing. I assume you are an American, so let me add the above is written without irony.
Yours in Poetry
keatsimnot.
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| Re: Child of my Buttocks by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
18-Dec-02/3:43 AM |
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This was chaucerian,witty, shitty, full of deeper meaning. Laughed out loud. "Please sir can I have some more"
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| Re: Black Buns by Bachus |
21-Aug-02/7:04 AM |
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I thought the Home of the Whopper line penile reference
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| Re: Heaven vs. Hell by angel born in hell |
26-Jul-02/3:53 AM |
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WE ALL GET A BIT P'SS'D OF SOMETIMES, JUST LET IT OUT
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| Re: annoying relative by kthulah |
25-Jul-02/5:46 AM |
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the meter and style reminds me of wilfred owens strange meeting with good use of para rhyme, nice
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