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A Christmas Thought (Free verse) by keatsImnot
You can feel it now it's in the air Christmas time is drawing near A time to sing and shout for joy In Bethlehem was born a boy A child to change our life, our way Oh lets rejoice that happy But now the reasons long been lost At Christmas time we count the cost We stuff ourselves with food and drink Of Jesus Christ we little think Around the Globe so far from thought The children starve, their lives so short So remember please on Christmas day A thought for those so far away You'll fill your glass, shut off your mind It's Christmas time, God Bless Mankind.

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.5
Weighted score: 5.0596013
Overall Rank: 6730
Posted: December 7, 2004 12:37 AM PST; Last modified: December 7, 2004 12:37 AM PST
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[10] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 81.153.196.50 | 7-Dec-04/3:58 AM | Reply
Wow. That's the most original Christmas thought ever. It's so important that we stop to think, at least once, about the true meaning of Christmas. Because in today's fast paced world of microwave dinners and plastic toys (as opposed to the more traditional woods), baby Jesus has been lost, only to be replaced by a giant Sony Dreamcast Cube (or whatever it is the little brats like to play with these days).
[5] Dovina @ 69.175.6.101 > -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. | 7-Dec-04/11:30 AM | Reply
your bad!
[n/a] keatsImnot @ 80.5.160.5 > Dovina | 8-Dec-04/2:22 PM | Reply
Dovina
Is that a Michael Jackson bad
[10] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 81.153.196.50 > keatsImnot | 8-Dec-04/3:15 PM | Reply
One can only hope. I think it's terrible that so many people feel they have to scorn the true message of Christmas. Yes, my views may not be trendy, they may not sound like a barrel of laughs when sat next to a week stuffing your face and watching T.V, but there really is more to life than getting presents. Dovina would do well to think about that over the coming weeks. Thanks for listening, and God bless. -10-
[n/a] keatsImnot @ 80.5.160.5 > -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. | 8-Dec-04/2:25 PM | Reply
Dark Angel
Thanks for those encouraging words, a 10 score was very generous where can I go from here?
ps the missing word was day
[n/a] wFraser Allonby Q.C.w @ 195.157.153.249 | 7-Dec-04/7:37 AM | Reply
I think horus8 might be dead
[5] Dovina @ 69.175.6.101 | 7-Dec-04/11:32 AM | Reply
"Oh lets rejoice that happy" ???
[10] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 81.153.196.50 > Dovina | 8-Dec-04/11:03 AM | Reply
See if you can guess the missing word. [1 mark]
[n/a] keatsImnot @ 80.5.160.5 | 8-Dec-04/2:18 PM | Reply
Dark Angel
Thanks for the encouraging words it's much appreciated 10 is quite some score.
[n/a] keatsImnot @ 80.5.160.5 | 8-Dec-04/2:20 PM | Reply
Dovina
Is that a Michael Jackson Bad.
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