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A Christmas Thought (Free verse) by keatsImnot

You can feel it now it's in the air Christmas time is drawing near A time to sing and shout for joy In Bethlehem was born a boy A child to change our life, our way Oh lets rejoice that happy But now the reasons long been lost At Christmas time we count the cost We stuff ourselves with food and drink Of Jesus Christ we little think Around the Globe so far from thought The children starve, their lives so short So remember please on Christmas day A thought for those so far away You'll fill your glass, shut off your mind It's Christmas time, God Bless Mankind.

keatsImnot 8-Dec-04/2:25 PM
Dark Angel
Thanks for those encouraging words, a 10 score was very generous where can I go from here?
ps the missing word was day




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