| Re: annoying relative by kthulah |
25-Jul-02/5:46 AM |
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the meter and style reminds me of wilfred owens strange meeting with good use of para rhyme, nice
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| Re: Heaven vs. Hell by angel born in hell |
26-Jul-02/3:53 AM |
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WE ALL GET A BIT P'SS'D OF SOMETIMES, JUST LET IT OUT
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| Re: Black Buns by Bachus |
21-Aug-02/7:04 AM |
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I thought the Home of the Whopper line penile reference
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| Re: Child of my Buttocks by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
18-Dec-02/3:43 AM |
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This was chaucerian,witty, shitty, full of deeper meaning. Laughed out loud. "Please sir can I have some more"
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20-Jan-03/7:48 AM |
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This cannot be the work of the genius who penned "Child of my buttocks" you sir are surely some imposter having a laugh. If not you have lost your wits.
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| Re: The Importance of Mr. Straughter by GregDeEgg |
12-Feb-03/1:45 AM |
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| Re: the price of success by brazen |
12-Feb-03/5:06 AM |
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13-Feb-03/2:41 AM |
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Nice sky personification, the poem epitomises the anti-climax and the false hopes of a new dawn. Depressing but touching.
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| Re: The Gentleman by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
18-Feb-03/2:36 AM |
See you can do it, when you try.
Top marks.
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19-Feb-03/2:49 AM |
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I like the poem, but the fact is bad people,ie psycopaths have no conscience to haunt them.
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| Re: Reply To the 9,000 Poets Against War. by Blue Magpie |
23-Feb-03/1:19 AM |
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This is good, great structure, killer punch line.
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| Re: A Christmas Thought by keatsImnot |
8-Dec-04/2:18 PM |
Dark Angel
Thanks for the encouraging words it's much appreciated 10 is quite some score.
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| Re: A Christmas Thought by keatsImnot |
8-Dec-04/2:20 PM |
Dovina
Is that a Michael Jackson Bad.
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| Re: Crack baby by Caducus |
7-Jul-05/7:54 AM |
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Some great lines "seeded fruit and rotten core"
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